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08-28-05, 07:09 PM
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Banned: Biting
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This was feedback posted for chip
IP: 1F87 F7ED
check'in pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllssss
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08-29-05, 07:10 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 82A5 4BFD
Uppity Up Up...Checking polls is nice...but we need votes!
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08-30-05, 05:19 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 7F2E 55A4
Upping for some more votes on this battle, close it up!!!!
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09-01-05, 01:34 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 07A6 D10F
Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for more votesssssssssssssss
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09-01-05, 01:57 AM
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T&T
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 0717 EA94
chip is hispanic..so...you know...you win.........
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09-01-05, 11:17 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Upping for my girl, good drop baby!
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09-01-05, 01:02 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Drama Queen
my vote, is overal drama queen reason for that her structure was immaculate which gave it a better flow, chip ur flow was not good.Her creativity in her verse was far more outstanding than chips her vocab was much expanded...and an overall 8/10 compaired to chips 6/10 v/drama queen RTF ill leave links later
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09-01-05, 01:09 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206261
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206261 rtf^^leave honest and explained vote on either battle......
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09-01-05, 07:59 PM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Upping for my girl................................
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09-03-05, 07:37 AM
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The Saviour
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 9839 DB84
I had a long vote drawn out, pressed "Post Vote" and I need 200 posts. I don't have Chip's feedback but I had Drama Queen's in a notepad document so here it is:
Drama Queen: You're structure was absolutely perfect, every line was the same length so subsequently it flowed well. It also flowed well due to a lot of inners. Good similes and metaphors and was consistently a good piece. I especially liked: When every human eye had his or her share of deadly visions. Vote for Drama Queen if I could. |
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09-03-05, 09:15 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 0248 2A71
Oh word...forgot about the post count...
Well sorry you typed it out for nothing man...thanks for feed though!
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09-04-05, 09:35 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.
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09-04-05, 12:55 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: CD97 5139
Checking this out...................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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09-06-05, 01:54 AM
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IP: 858E CB5D
Voted For: Drama Queen
Drama Queen-Ok...good verse.Stayed on topic and shit.Had a basic rhyme scheme..but flow was still good.I liked some of the metas and comparisons you did.Like the eagle/soarin one.Really deep shit here.Only line I didn't like was the one about needin a hug.As it appearing to come outta nowhere and fucked with your wording and all.But overall...good verse...8.8/10 Chip-Really...and I mean...really...fucked up structure.I mean...look at the 1st 2 lines.You seemed to stay on topic..as the concept goes.But your wording was messed as some lines just seemed to come outta nowhere.And ur flow was ite..but the words u rhymed weren't.Like that 2nd to last one...you were rhymin me with me too much.And ur lines weren't deep...they were really basic.Newbish style.so next time..work on structure..like don't have one line so long and the one after so short.Make ur rhymes more complex.ANd drop the newbish style Vote-Drama Queen rtf below in 3 days  ...or..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207400 |
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09-06-05, 05:20 AM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 0F8C 09C6
fuck Macreep's rascist ass......... good vote from Deranged, although i'm not sure what my newbish style is......... it'll probably go away after a couple more battles.........
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