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09-10-05, 11:59 AM | #1 | ||||
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"Street Legend" - Intermental
IP: 2489 EFCB
Check this out new song recorded today:
www.soundclick.com/intermental its called: "Street Legend" Check it out, give sum feed, leave a link and ill rtf holla......2 links will follow in jus one min.....
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09-10-05, 12:04 PM | #2 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 2415 4588
lets see......
beat is gd..... u r really elevated with ur quality....thats lot better......... chorus:i didnt really like it..... but those verses are nicee...... flow is ok..... nice drop...............but not ur best
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09-10-05, 12:05 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 2489 EFCB
thanks.............
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09-10-05, 12:48 PM | #4 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
get on msn man.
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09-10-05, 12:50 PM | #5 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: F91E FCB7
nice song man seriously, u got a new mic? cuz u sound better than before, seriously i think this is ur best, we really need to collab again
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09-10-05, 01:28 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 0974 487D
thanks alot dawg fo sho we hve to collab again
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09-10-05, 05:05 PM | #7 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
one of ur weakest tracks...u didn't ride this beat well...and I never caught onto the flow...
the hook was off beat and ur voice is too weak for beats this strong...either up ur delivery or dub ur vocals to create a stronger presence ncie try...but I wasn't feelin it |
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09-10-05, 06:19 PM | #8 | ||||
"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 5F4F B70C
Good shit son, Beat was HOT...chorus coulda been betta buh it was still good....verse was good...buh take ya time, sounds like u was a lil off beat at first buh its all good, overall Good...
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09-10-05, 07:47 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: D414 70C9
thanks dawg.....................
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09-10-05, 09:52 PM | #10 | ||||||
Real Nigga, nigga.
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IP: AA0C 18AC
hook is straight ass.
when u say nigga u sound mad gay and shit. you sound mad unsure about this shit. did you write to the beat? flow is straight terrible. wtf, this is bad son. lmfao @ the second verse. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207984' ^ Leave Feedback on this shit.
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09-11-05, 12:18 PM | #11 | ||||
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IP: E91D 2549
^^^thanks dawg i apreciate that..............
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09-12-05, 01:56 AM | #12 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 666C F77E
this is aight...i don't like ya voice then again i don't like mine...u sound unsure bout ya self on this track...almost like ur afriad to say anything...u hesistate at parts...ya flow falls off at a few parts and u sometimes struggle to get back on the beat...i hate the hook...lyrics are ok...and ya delivery is ok...overall an aight drop...keep at it fam...rtf on "Royaltee Mafia"
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