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Old 09-10-05, 11:59 AM   #1
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"Street Legend" - Intermental

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Check this out new song recorded today:

www.soundclick.com/intermental

its called:

"Street Legend"

Check it out, give sum feed, leave a link and ill rtf holla......2 links will follow in jus one min.....
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Old 09-10-05, 12:04 PM   #2
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lets see......

beat is gd.....

u r really elevated with ur quality....thats lot better.........
chorus:i didnt really like it.....
but those verses are nicee......
flow is ok.....
nice drop...............but not ur best
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Old 09-10-05, 12:05 PM   #3
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thanks.............
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Old 09-10-05, 12:48 PM   #4
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get on msn man.
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Old 09-10-05, 12:50 PM   #5
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nice song man seriously, u got a new mic? cuz u sound better than before, seriously i think this is ur best, we really need to collab again
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Old 09-10-05, 01:28 PM   #6
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thanks alot dawg fo sho we hve to collab again
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Old 09-10-05, 05:05 PM   #7
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one of ur weakest tracks...u didn't ride this beat well...and I never caught onto the flow...

the hook was off beat

and ur voice is too weak for beats this strong...either up ur delivery or dub ur vocals to create a stronger presence

ncie try...but I wasn't feelin it
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Old 09-10-05, 06:19 PM   #8
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Good shit son, Beat was HOT...chorus coulda been betta buh it was still good....verse was good...buh take ya time, sounds like u was a lil off beat at first buh its all good, overall Good...
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Old 09-10-05, 07:47 PM   #9
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thanks dawg.....................
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Old 09-10-05, 09:52 PM   #10
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hook is straight ass.

when u say nigga u sound mad gay and shit. you sound mad unsure about this shit. did you write to the beat? flow is straight terrible.

wtf, this is bad son. lmfao @ the second verse.

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Old 09-11-05, 12:18 PM   #11
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^^^thanks dawg i apreciate that..............
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Old 09-12-05, 01:56 AM   #12
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this is aight...i don't like ya voice then again i don't like mine...u sound unsure bout ya self on this track...almost like ur afriad to say anything...u hesistate at parts...ya flow falls off at a few parts and u sometimes struggle to get back on the beat...i hate the hook...lyrics are ok...and ya delivery is ok...overall an aight drop...keep at it fam...rtf on "Royaltee Mafia"
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