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09-08-05, 09:02 PM
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"The Bird Cage (Criminal Diss)"
IP: 0825 899A
Haha, These Fuckin Children
... Here You Go, Keeeeeeystyle For This Homo Haha I Dont Even Write Text, Still Kill This Fuckin Sally [[Verse One]] Simply Put, You're A Faggot... You Couldnt Hope To Succeed, When I Pri- Establish Predictions, You Touched More Then Ya Knee. Your Lines Arent The Least Bit Anything, *Sigh*... Rhym Hard? Ya, Like This Criminal Could Possibly Step Through My Bars. Even Returning Lines At This Fucking Lame Is Nonsense... Its A Waste, What Am I Doing? I Dunno... Just Like Your Lyrical Content Way Out Of Your Teritorry... BC Would Ice This Hoe, Didnt Even Tickle My Fancy The Slightest When I Saw Him Ridin Bone. [[Chorus]] Sitting In The Bird Cage... Tea Party, Hardy Hardy Me Oh My Whoooooa, Criminal Lifts His Head Then Drops The Soap... Whadda You Know? Just Asking For Me To Make Him My Hoe. Dick Tucked Lips Pucked When Sitting In The... Bird Cage! This Femist Male Host To Oh So Homo Feminine Traits, Says He Tuff But Comes With Fight With A Waddle Like Gate. La La Laaaaaaaaa... Fuck This Gay Shit I Feel Like Im In His... Bird Cage!!! [[Verse Two]] Lololmao Fuck That, Like Your Ass Is Getting Another Verse ... Lol What A Joke You Fuckin Queer. Back To My Blunt, Later... FAGGOT |
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09-08-05, 09:58 PM
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#2
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Lol criminal = Owned.. Nuff said.. Reply to my crimnal diss
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09-10-05, 08:05 PM
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#3
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IP: 59A2 1C71
a chorus diss..
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09-17-05, 12:44 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 377B FB0C
thats was prett good man
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09-17-05, 03:35 PM
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#5
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IP: 28AD 5545
... Not Really,
*Scratches Head* I Dont Even Remember Writing This |
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09-17-05, 05:57 PM
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#6
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
lol.....comedic
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09-18-05, 09:36 PM
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#7
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0AFC 5CA5
I thought it wuz ite.A lot of lines coulda have been worded better for harder hit.In a battle..this shit is a no.But here..it ite.Better than his one.More wordplay or personals would have been better
Overall-6.0 RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=209018 |
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09-22-05, 01:09 AM
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#8
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IP: 2361 1E5E
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Those were the only lines I liked. |
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