http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206050
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206910


Title pretty much explains the track

and yes, it was freestyled
been spitting going on 11 years

http://www.soundclick.com/DemonicStorm




-Storm

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dope freestyle dawg, really nice, lyrics are pretty damn good for a freestyle and your flow was impressive, abit choppy but kept it goin neva stutted and it was generally on point, beat = good freestyle beat and your presense was good I liked this

props

return the fav kid and drop some feedback on mine and black magiks new track (link below) -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208197

pz

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lol@him probably thinking I was a dude

the disadvantages of having a husky voice
(that face you see on the right side of my "Benevolent Green" sig is me, just for future references)

thanks for the feed

might wanna fix your sig, doesn't accept HTML code
gotta use VCode [ center][ /center](no spaces) in order to get it to center




anybody else?

Would appreciate some more thoughts, good or bad
I dont cry about feeds




-Storm

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Yea, this is one of my favorite beats, your flow was really good. But for some reason its hard for me to believe its a freestyle, since you touched on some topics that normal people would have to think about, lol. The cross me twice line was a favorite. Overall, good flow, good vocab, solid track.....great freestyle

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Grim

alot of people find it hard to believe

until they actually hop in a cipha with me

I can spit about almost anythang
certain subjects I'm not really into

but I read alot
and for some reason I'm quick minded
always have
which is why I think freestyling came easy to me

might take the average MC months maybe a year to perfect the gift of freestylin
it only took me like a month

not really that hard
all you got to do is have the next line already thought out in your head
and try to have it relate to the line you just let slip from your lips

like Jay said it's "Lyrical Exercise"
probably one of his best joints and he had to make it a "bonus" track

I've had 11 years in the "Lyrical" gym under my belt

1 (1) 2 (2) 3 (3) 4 (Breath Easy!)




-Storm

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Sorry don't believe this was a freestyle, not even for a minute. Your flow was okay, your voice sounds your like your 8 yrs old. If it was freestyle then it was hella dope for a free, but otherwise just average. Peace

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

Wow, if this was a freestyle, definately a better female on the site, cus a lot of people say they free,then dont, especially the chicks,who lie a lot...but dope voice,i hate high pitched bitches and you sound good,keep going with it.

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