i actally liked reading this peice, it was....interesting,

willa,
i have to agree with atticus on this, you lines need to be chopped down just alil bit
and use of workin on multis, wont hurt either...but over all it was a good drop..

Mentalz,
nice work bro, and your multis were good, you kept it together and it was a nice drop.

but anywho, this was some good work keep it up

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