Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No feeding
I spit first
2hr checkin
30 min spit
g'luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-05 at 06:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Eazy-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-05 06:21 PM.

This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it

Shazz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-05 06:57 PM.

Uppin for his verse

Fuckin Herb didn't even spit
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Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
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I didn't know you dropped rofl..... werid. ..

Voted For: Shazz

Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
4...self glorifing...but ite
Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
3...my goodness...this wuz bad..
You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
3...are you even trying?
Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
3.....

This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
3...too basic...
I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
3.....no....
Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
2......whack..sorry.
This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
1....no punch here.
Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it
0.....absolutely nothing here that belongs in a battle

One sided battle.
OK...Shazz got this..tho hiz verse wasn't all that.Still basic and shit.But at least all his bars had a punch in it.
E-eazy...problem is...a lot of ur shit didn't have a punch.Like...you say he gotta make room for a L..now how does that diss?And you tell him not to use Eazy-E lines...(which he didn;t)...and again..wtf is a line like that doing in a battle?

Vote-Shazz
RTF BELOW in 3 DAYS OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209188

WTF this is a mad d/r vote he talked bout me not droppin the whole time adn I already did and plus he did 8 lines not 10 DQ his vote

U accusing me of d/r?

Kid..you don't wanna step to me....so know your place.

And so wat if he didn't know u dropped..he doesn't understand the battle system as he came from RB.

And who the fuck DQ's someone for posting LESS than the line max.I heard of DQ'n someone for posting more...but less?

And DQ my vote?...I explained shit perfectly..so hush up...fucking newb.

Voted For: Shazz

This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
^^not feelin it,bad flow in this bar,bad opener,wack

I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
^^PLAYED OUT!!!...wack

Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
^^dawg,tha lyrically impaired shit is played out now,and your stretchin linez to much

This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
^^no punch,self glorification kinda,wack

Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it
^^wack as fuck,bad closer...no punch

you seriously need better vocab and punches and work on ya flow and structure...no hate tho...jus keep at it and elevate


Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
^^nice opener,i like tha flow,i was feelin it,nice multie

Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
^^not feelin tha second line but an iight punch

You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
^^again,nice flow but not really feelin it,nice attempt at a punch

Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
^^pretty good closer,iight punches and nice self glorification mixed in wit it

^^you definatley had tha better verse,jus up ya vocab a little bit and git a couple harder punches but u dont need alot of elevation like him

no hate to either...keep at it homiez...nice job

Voted For: Shazz

Look at this fake eazy-e, soon to be 0-3
He wanting to spit first cause he afriad of me
^dont matta who spit first weak punch 0/10^
Him goin 2nd would be a choke like eminem in 8mile
Im beating you so bad just like deleting a file
^no........no punch whack 0/10^
You won't even spit im wasting my own time
Can't even spit right, what? forgot how to rhyme
^no......no punch nothing 0/10^
Takin shazz out is a task this kid will never complete
because with flow that bad how do you expect to compete
^only really decent punch 4/10^
Overall:I feel that your verse lacked any real complexity, it was basic and not to any point...i feel you need to up on your punches and personals over all...try aiming your verse at your opponent and make it effect him...overall 4/10


This fool saeled his fate cause he has no talent
Ur usless like a knight wit no gallent
^No, bad wordplay and bad flow 0/10^
I got verses and punches that crush u lik a truck
This nigga got 1 option on this battle that get fucked
^no punch....very soft spoken 0/10^
Ur lyrics are like toxic waste they stink up the air
This nigga must be blind cause his rythme sux ....or just lyric inpaired
^Wouldnt matta if he's blind, he could still flow..0/10^
This battle is done and u should declare me the winner
U betta make room in ur rec for cause a L comin wit ya
^played line, no punch really....0/10^
Ur a dumb ass cause u challangin me is a KO requested
And don't try the played Eazy-E jokes cause I'm gonna....Except it
^weak way to end ur verse....now punch 0/10^
Overall:I think that your verse was lyrically soft, and contained no punches throughout it all...u need to up on vocab wordplay punches personals etc. got ways to go overall in this battle you had 0/10...wasnt feelin it....

v/shazz

overall: this battle was weak...u needa come harder........

rtf shazz......please 1

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Voted For: Shazz

Good good battle shazz just edged it i liked his flow and punches better

Shazz Edged by

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Mmm......Big_O i could use more feedback but thats still coo...
Need 1 mo folks........