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5 | 100.00% |
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actually i for got about u....
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IP:
Voted For: Mimesis
i'll jack this bitch off the ground with no clue leave his mouth dry just like his ass with no crew 2...he does have a crew..u know E-style?... this puss is occupied so stop being a mad prick cos even if u moved bak'n'forth ur lines r still stashed script 3...weak.... you convinced to scare peeps..yeah u a lyrical scare-crow like an unknown ID your fruitless like a bare-glow 4...first line is more like a compliment.Saying he scare people?That's a good thing to him.Punch wuz ite tho...except for the unknown ID part ![]() we on the fooball pitch..bitch clap you black ass on the bench when he comes all heads turn cos its like'here comes the stench' 3...Mimesis is white...and punch wuz played.I mean..ya concept is "people turn heads cuz he stinks?".Nah. he cudnt be more life-less than run after bored asses on the lounge this ice is more price-less than rolling 6 dices on the ground 3...nah...wuzn't feelin this as a punch.Like the rhyming tho. i dont need mack five's to make peeps see thru this whore my fist is enuff just like hitting frequent soft-scores 1...this is weak..again.A whack concept.Ur concept is that he is't worthy of dying from the gun..so u'll use ur fist?Weak.... this bitch be holding my clit in search for authentic fame but its hard to slap groupies off when they appeasing the dame 2...weak....set-up wuz irelevant he bites so much that his lips are a means to communicate after waistin time on ur sorry ass he'd be sayin 'fanks mate' 2....No...c'mon...spit a hot bar. i'll paint u black and blue than the back-street boys grab ur chord like a broom so u'd give d last-bitch-noise 3...this multi wuz really forced in my opinion. ...........im done with this dick-splash.......... dont worry i'll let u holla from the left side of my oval ......u can scratch ur thought like its ass-rash..... 3...that middle part threw the flow off complety. cos with all thats said this shit is all over 2..I'm sorry...but are u gon finish that bar?? Won battles, beaten the best here, respected, always graspin fans ....So what the fuck makes this herb think she even has a chance? 3...umm...didn't connect as a punch.Borderline self glorifing I won that battle on lyrics.. then let you follow me here in the past Its just sad that youve been behind me for a fuckin year and a half 4......decent Ya trash.. I remember our MSN chats.. going to need medicine, son Cause it must be hard, Dissin the same dude you were beggin to get lessons from 5...good personal...Liked the rhyming words u used too. You're pulling this out?.. shit, that must be the speech of the devil I beat you in '04 and was barely decent.. ..and you STILL haven't reached that level 7...good shit...worded nicely I read that 'Brutality Ent.' shit in your sig.. but you should listen fool Why the fuck did you need to make your face fit the description too 8....WOw...dope,set-up relevant..punch dope..worded good. Ripping dudes.. but I like to porportionalize, I'm mean with the dead So I'll just slit your throat to even out the one in between your legs 4...aah...wasn't that good. Your sig is pretty funny though.. now I need to leave you fucked dude And it aint that we CANT be like you.. its just that nobody wants too 3...nah..I've heard something like this before You're a waste of life.. and now you really want to know what's rude? You haven't done shit in a year.. ..so me winning with less lines is the final fuck you 3...didn't connect. OK.. Ynove... ur punches were weak IMO.U just need some better concepts.Like that fist/soft-core line and heads turn/stench one....that is played shit.My advice..when writing..don't use anything that you have any doubts of being played.get more creative 'n shit.U had a forced multi with the back-street-boys/last-bitch-noice one.And the first bar..mimesis is in a crew..so fake personal. Mim... well...obviously not ur best.First bar wuz borderline SG.I think the "beatin 04/reached that level" and the "brutaly ent" bar got you this battle.The 2nd to last bar wuz kinda played.Some lines were a lil too direct with execution.But..an easy win Vote-Mimesis |
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IP:
Word. The intro and the outro were just meant to be statements.. not necessarily punches. I just wanted to start it out and it the way I did. Those lines weren't supposed to make people be like "'OOOOOHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTT" they were just opening and the closing the battle out.
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IP:
Yeah, I didn't ask if you forgot.
I remember most every site I've had more then 10 battles on. |
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IP:
Voted For: Mimesis
umm this was pretty one sided... mim you ripped her a new arsehole.... good job... yvonne none of your punches stood out to me.. you have elevated but you aint on mims level..... v/ mim |
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IP:
^^do unto others what u want them to do to u...xplaining a lil better wudnt hurt ur fingers...but thanx for peepin anyways..
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i would explain better but there really isn't any need.. ill explain what you need to do though. you need to think of better concepts for your punches and work on wording them so they fit better as a punch and they hit harder.... |
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IP:
Word up.
Keep voting and shit, bitches. HOWLA. |
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IP:
can you rtf n hit up the link in my sig wit an honest vote.. thanks....
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IP:
iight....
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iight yo mimesis u gonna have to continue uppin this cos im travelling out and i aint gonna be on for a long time...
iight wun
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IP:
Uhh.. Alright.
Vote up.. face EATERS. WHAT?! |
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IP:
Upping this shit.
Keep voting you gay faces. Shit. |
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IP:
Upping this again.
Keep fucking voting and shit.. |
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