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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
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09-28-05, 07:56 PM
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...Liven Proof...
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needs better structure, wordplay, imagery...wasnt feelin it all that much but it was decent jus work on those points i mentioned and u'll be aight kid
6/10 <---peep mines ..doS |
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