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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-02-05, 08:58 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
Vocabulary: Work on it
Flow: okay Structure: Work on it Concept: Work on it Topic: Work on it Favorite Lines: Nothing Rating: 4/10 Advice: This is bad even for a freestyle. No originality, nothing sticks out , nothing quotable, you had no good wordplay and your punches were lacking, as was your vocabulary. Elevate.
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