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+Gunz+ 1 16.67%
Black Arts 5 83.33%
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Old 09-30-05, 02:09 AM   #1
Black Arts
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+Gunz+ vs Black Arts

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Old 09-30-05, 05:42 PM   #2
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Old 09-30-05, 05:55 PM   #3
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Man Black anit "creative"......so his "art" his nonsense
cuz he steady "Drawin Blanks"....like a retards consience
Male of Female..hell whos really kno's his state of health
Dick and pussy on oppasite legs.............
so it's a undertstement to tell him to fuck himself
Who's the boss...saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross



quick key...................
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Old 09-30-05, 06:48 PM   #4
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Old 09-30-05, 07:12 PM   #5
Black Arts
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Guns? now i know this kids gonna talk some tired shit
Wouldn't know an auto, if i left your face in my tyres grip
Like Stephen Hawking, you just dribble, can't spit, you're lame
How you gonna aim punches, when your crosshairs can't even hit your name?
Final question...............why'd do rap? can't hide you're wack, surprised at that?
Nigga couldn't blow up if he sucked a dick, he can't disguise the fact
G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"
 
Old 10-01-05, 06:15 AM   #6
Black Arts
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right let the voting begin
 
Old 10-01-05, 07:03 AM   #7
Daubs
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polls............................................. .

good verse.
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Old 10-01-05, 12:45 PM   #8
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Voted For: +Gunz+

gunz-your verse was pretty dope, you incorporated some pretty decent vocab although minor spelling problems..it was nice...ur structure wasnt all that but didnt take off the flow..nice man....nice punches and personals...wordplay was good...overall ur verse was about 6/10 g'job

black arts-Your verse was poorly structured. The problem with this was that ur lines was stretched and it flowed bad....ur vocab lacked any greatness...hard to see a good intact verse...ur punches really werent well incorporated....they were pretty weak, ur personals...were kinda whack..wasnt really fealin ur verse..overall 4/10

v/+gunz+

Rtf gunz within 72 hours or less, or this vote will be dq'd
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Old 10-01-05, 05:21 PM   #9
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Voted For: Black Arts

G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"

VS

saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross
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Old 10-01-05, 05:46 PM   #10
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lmao^^^^^

dick head.

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Old 10-01-05, 07:50 PM   #11
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Voted For: Black Arts

Man Black anit "creative"......so his "art" his nonsense
cuz he steady "Drawin Blanks"....like a retards consience
^^^
Nice intro, had creativity...good punch nice...

Male of Female..hell whos really kno's his state of health
Dick and pussy on oppasite legs.............
^^^
No whats up with this....sorry but this is not even dissin him

so it's a undertstement to tell him to fuck himself
Who's the boss...saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
^^^
biggin youreself up here...doest work on battles

6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross
^^^^
ok ender....

4/10 good intro and closer but the midle ones sucked.....no hate



Guns? now i know this kids gonna talk some tired shit
Wouldn't know an auto, if i left your face in my tyres grip
^^^
Iite intro here, biggin ure self up here bt had a decent punch

Like Stephen Hawking, you just dribble, can't spit, you're lame
How you gonna aim punches, when your crosshairs can't even hit your name?
^^^
hhaa aiite thas a good bit here , nice punch

Final question...............why'd do rap? can't hide you're wack, surprised at that?
Nigga couldn't blow up if he sucked a dick, he can't disguise the fact
^^^
basic ishh but funny here....

G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"
^^^
Ok closer

I was feelin Gunz's intro and closer better, but ure mid shit was better, much better, and ure into and closer werent bad jus a lil mediocre...7/10
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Old 10-02-05, 04:10 AM   #12
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wow your votes so wrong, you broke down the wrong bars mate^

look closely.
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Old 10-02-05, 10:14 AM   #13
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Voted For: Black Arts

imma go with black arts for this one...+gunz+ waz good too buh i think black arts was a bit better...i liked ur 3rd nd 6th line
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Old 10-04-05, 09:48 PM   #14
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Voted For: Black Arts

im voting for black art only cause he tried to land more punches

v/black arts
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Old 10-04-05, 10:05 PM   #15
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polllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............if i were to vote i would have voted for black arts..........
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