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Old 10-13-05, 02:31 PM   #1
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Dust Into Dust (Why?) ft. Mischief

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yea, this shit's crazy......not one of my most recent tracks but one of the hottest

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=371493

i haven't had time to put it on my soundclick yet so just look on his
it's ALL THE WAY AT THE BOTTOM, so yea it's there
gimme some feed on this
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Old 10-13-05, 02:47 PM   #2
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u go by mischief ?
first guy flows not very good i dont think but lyrics are ok
not feeling the hook lol
2nd guy flow alot beter pretty good lyrics vocals need to be a little louder im liking the flow
props jsut up the lyrics change the hook definately a pretty god track
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Old 10-13-05, 03:07 PM   #3
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no, i'm not mischief that's the guy matt i told you about
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Old 10-13-05, 03:14 PM   #4
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so were u 1st or 2nd wahts his aim im gonna be like i want a beat bitch
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Old 10-13-05, 03:27 PM   #5
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lol......he's the 2nd guy n i'll give you his aim soon as i remember what it is
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Old 10-13-05, 05:37 PM   #6
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oh well yea ur verse was good too lol
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Old 10-13-05, 06:28 PM   #7
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this i actually a nice piece i was interested inda beat and da lyrics!had me bopping my head i would give this nice pieve a 8.5/10 because i see u got some skill but yeh RTF in my track "Gottah Hustle"
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Old 10-14-05, 07:23 AM   #8
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thanx.........uppin
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Old 10-14-05, 10:19 AM   #9
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Quality is iffy, yo lyrics were cool but delivery is lackin famo....the other guy was ok
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Old 10-17-05, 10:00 PM   #10
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YO...u posted dis old az song.....I didnt even like mah verse
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Old 10-17-05, 10:54 PM   #11
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this was an aight track...wasn't really feeling the dude on the 1st and 2nd verse...ya 2nd verse was better then ya first one though...quality is ehh...mic presence could be worked on a lil...lyrics were aight...delivery needs a lil work...the dude on the 3rd verse was somewhat better...liked ya flow better and ya lyrics better too...mic presence seems like it needs a lil work...delivery was better then the first dudes...seems like ur more comfortable on the mic then the first dude...overall this was a decent drop...keep it up fam...rtf on "So Long"
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Old 10-18-05, 08:16 AM   #12
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YO...u posted dis old az song.....I didnt even like mah verse


too bad hoe, i never posted it on this site
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Old 10-20-05, 07:50 AM   #13
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up, up, and awaaaaaay!
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Old 10-20-05, 08:19 AM   #14
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alright the beat you used in this shit is decent.....your flow is decent...aint nothin too legendary but its good......the change ups you got are hot i like the way you go from one flow too an other....its pretty tight....your lyrics are cool.....the emotions should be raised a lil bit you sound like you just rappin and changin it up....your presense is good...you at least sound like ur sposed too be on the beat...overall decent.... 7/10
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