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Check in by: 10-24-05 at 07:31 PM

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Lil Greyzie has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-05 07:32 PM.

Achilles has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-05 07:36 PM.

You couldnt beat this game of you used a cheat code
Your lyrics are dangerously cheesy like cheetos//
Dont call this revenge, just a friendly joke
Sure you perform live, until you xbox broke//
I got armor locked in so you better be ready
Be ready to step outta the closet with r. kelly//
homeboy, when i start flowin man
we'll see you in fetal position like fuckin sonogram//
Yeah you dont bite like a chick on a first date
You got beat more times then a runner's heart rate//
grey'z aint a penny but yea hes a hardaway
time to take the trash out, i treat deadlines like garbage days//
This dude's the opposite of hot his name'Z "a-chill"
my rhymes are a horror like the amytiville//
with a symphony of noise thatll leave ya black and blue
when im done, youll be the 4th member of the blue man group//
just give him a mic, you aint gonna impress
this bitch'll piss on himself like a pregnancy test//

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Voted For: Lil Greyzie

You couldnt beat this game of you used a cheat code
Your lyrics are dangerously cheesy like cheetos//
kinda corny.. but ight
Dont call this revenge, just a friendly joke
Sure you perform live, until you xbox broke//
lol
I got armor locked in so you better be ready
Be ready to step outta the closet with r. kelly//
eh
homeboy, when i start flowin man
we'll see you in fetal position like fuckin sonogram//
ok
Yeah you dont bite like a chick on a first date
You got beat more times then a runner's heart rate//
decent.. 1st line isn't relevant tho
grey'z aint a penny but yea hes a hardaway
time to take the trash out, i treat deadlines like garbage days//
no
This dude's the opposite of hot his name'Z "a-chill"
my rhymes are a horror like the amytiville//
nah
with a symphony of noise thatll leave ya black and blue
when im done, youll be the 4th member of the blue man group//
wack
just give him a mic, you aint gonna impress
this bitch'll piss on himself like a pregnancy test//
haha


Y U Tryin Hard?, Tryin Hard, When Ya Lines Disabled...& Ain Climbing Far!
Wit Such A Short Shot U Aimin Far, If "LIONS Knocked Up" Ya Face...........
.................................................. ...Greyzie Still Wouldnt "Impregnate SCARS"!
decent
Tell Me More Bout U Quickly, Bruised Ya Neck Thought Hey Call Ita Hicky
But Around Town I Heard U "PAN-SEE"(panties)..U Are Related To "Vicky"!
way forced
Imma Spit On Ya Fans Lips, Cuz U Bitch, And For Ah "Boy"...U Mad "Thick"
Let Me Stop U Might Get, An Erected Clit While Typin Ya "TRAN-SKRIPT"!
nice wordplay
Greyzie Tries Biggie Flows, But He'd Rather Watch Biggie Pose...................
Give Biggie Blows, Cuz Like "Shocked Fans"......He Viewed His Dick...........
.................................................. ............And Thought "BIGGIE, WHOOOOA"!
ROFL

No Limit Shown So I'm Drillin Ya Soul, Prostitutin Raps...Wont Get Em Sold!
I Commited Ah "Minor Injury"......Any1 Else Wanna Battle Ah 13 Year Old?
nice personal

v/ achilles.

reason- harder punches & a nice personal, you had that forced panties line tho.

rtf- me and withersman

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fuck i voted in the wrong thing....lmao




i'll get this fixed.

chea lol its aight homie, uppin for some votes i'll return it

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uppin for some votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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damn can i get that vote that illest made for me? lol they took it away completely

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Voted For: Achilles

lol

achilles your shit was dope im feelin your punches...your opener was good...flow was good....im feelin the structure. some people on here might not but i think its koo......personals..is tight i was feelin em.....nice wordplay and shyt
8/10

Lil greyzie: wack wack wack..elevate..no way in hell you winnin that

2/10

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Voted For: Achilles

yeah man this was a dope verse achiles your opener was nice you had some nice multies punches some good personals i wasnt feeling ya structure but ya verse was preety good 7/10

lil-you had NO MULTIES weak punches personals were ehh i was feeling ya structure try not doin thie// anymore

werd i needa up my game though......good lookin out

more votes ppl

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Voted For: Achilles

props on this easy win no doubt
you were much more original other kid cam mad played nice wordplay props uppin this for you dawg

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