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10-24-05, 04:32 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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damn speats this is a pretty deep piece..aint too shabby....i'm feeling the context of the rhyme scheme and your flow was good the whole way through....you had decent vocab..seems like ur tryin too bring a life story of some sort nice shit..
overall 7/10
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