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Old 10-24-05, 07:15 PM   #1
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Old 10-24-05, 08:37 PM   #2
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What the fuck...you fucking sleepers...

I will return the favor, so get fucking feeding you fucking fucked fucker fuck head fucking faggots.
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Old 10-24-05, 11:41 PM   #3
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beat is fucking dope
flow is dope too man, i think this is one of your best trak, i like the ps2 mic seriously lol, where you get the beat? i cant listen to this completaly cuz i have to sleep lol, but dope ass song man, this is seriously your best, u elevated like fucking woah , befor ei thaught u had problems breathin and now i guess you learned how to comtrole that, dope man keep it up
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Old 10-24-05, 11:47 PM   #4
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the beat is real tight, your flow is really good, delivery is solid as well, lyrics are what make me like this they were so underground, really grabbed my interest. but overall I like this not one of my favs by you but I like your style man, cant wait to do another collab wit you.

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Old 10-25-05, 12:01 AM   #5
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prolly the best i heard from you. obviously for the tourny, but flow is good, lyrics aiight, quality - not so good, but ya flow is mos def improving. Yea man, good luck in the tourny... Some good lines in here too. Cats gon prolly over look you, so make sure you take advantage of it. Word. And get yo ass to Edmotnon already. haha

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Old 10-25-05, 12:04 AM   #6
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anal sex huh?


aiigh


and pssf @ "gimme the prizes"...Im sorry...I jus can't see doin somethin for somethin so superficial

I can't knock you and other people...I jus can't comprehend it


flow is good...and ur presence has elevated


solid drop



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Old 10-25-05, 12:58 AM   #7
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Thanks all...

Uppin.

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Old 10-25-05, 01:15 AM   #8
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word although quality kinda drownin u..ya flow and ability to stay on top of the beat outshined and this is pretty much the first thing ive ever peeped from you.. showed u how much i be in this section lol .. but nah ...loving the way you ended it ..this whole tourney thing is real serious it seems lol. good shit tho..Glad to see you moving on to the next round.
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Old 10-25-05, 01:15 AM   #9
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lol you chose that beat?? that beat was alright...... i couldn't stand it but yeah your quality's decent for ps2 mic.....your flow was cool.....fit the beat pretty well.....presense was there you had good emotion sounding like you wanna win tha prizes lol....good stuff man...feeling the track overall-7/10
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Old 10-25-05, 05:28 AM   #10
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this was an aight drop...ya flow needs a lil work...ya quality is so so due to the ps2 mic...ya presence was good...ya delivery seems like it could also use a lil bit of work...ya lyrics were ok...they could've been better...overall this was an aight track...just a work on ya deilvery and flow and shit...besides that just keep droppin fam
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Old 10-25-05, 10:12 PM   #11
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Word. Presence and that shit. The beat was pretty cool, and your flow is sexy(though mine is truthfully doper). Lyrics were decent, but you know, can't be knocked out at round 0 unless you no-show, so fuck lyrics. Delivery was okay, but you can deliver a copy of your book to my house ASAP. PS2 mics are also dope as fuck.
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Old 10-25-05, 11:07 PM   #12
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HOLY SHIT....your vocals are hurting my damn ears man.....im listening through headphones....but damn....too loud man...get a condensor or dynamic or something......

flow could use some touch ups....its a bit shaky...


delivery is pretty good.....


BUT....i wont listen to any more of your stuff till u get a mic man....cause those vocals kill me......with the hiss and loudness......tell me when u get a new one
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Old 10-25-05, 11:10 PM   #13
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ah'ight...ok u opened good..but ya delivery is falling off quickly....the quality is bad..u got them "ssss' sound on ya s's....good pick on the jae millz beat tho..I used that shit WAYYYY back....lyrically I was feeling u...u stayed wit the topic all the way thru...flow was koo, a bit repetitve but koo.......biggest thing was ya quality an delivery even tho it seems the quality took away from ya delivery as well..cuz ya vocals vol would fade in & out....ya voice sounds diff....never hear dya that intense before.....it works for ya son...u should exploit that style alil more...overall this was ah'ight def below ya usual level, btu anyways stay up..keep experimenting....1
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