thanx for votin man appreciate it, i rtf'd in your battle wit oreo. uppin this..........

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uhh...could you hit my battle with daubs please???

ye man,

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Voted For: one mic

One Mic The beginning of your rhyme was kinda off. As you went on you progressed with real funny punches. I liked them. It really gave a boast to you winning. I liked the closure real forcefull an hardhitting. Come with more multis. other then that 8/10

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Micsachek Ok verse here. Basic newb verse. Alot of your bars werent hitting. Some were avergae at least. Come with harder hitting punches,personals an multis.

No hate but my vote goes to One Mic.

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Honestly i expect better from you one mic... problems i had with Micsachek ---- lines are way to stretch out need to make sure lines match up it will look better and it will help keep your flow in tact....also wordplay is played out.... way to basic ... but i give you a point on the attempt.... One Mic word of advise (wich i very much doubt you need) easy on the selfglorification... and since when was it cool to start a text battle with "yo yo"...never don't do that again...... your wordplay was also very basic ... and structure needs work..... both of you need to up you game up very much.... Just some honest feedback no HATE

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

Wait,I think I seen that it said One Mic was winning...Am I right?...Well if I am,He shouldnt be...Must be dickriders cuz One's verse wasnt good...anyway.jus checkin pollz

Voted For: Micsachek

This was an unfair battle cos one mic dropped 8 lines and Micsachek dropped 14.

one mic had quite a few personals, they were ok but need to be worded better. No bars that I really liked but he tried to be creative.

Micsacheck was also creative, with no personals, yet he had a few more lines which in my opinion got him this battle.

If both had dropped equal amount of lines I think one mic coulda taken it, but as it was Micsachek had quantity so he got this.

v/ Micsachek

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bad structure

bothe of you


idunno im not voting cuz its nothing special from both parts....

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