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Old 10-25-05, 12:24 AM   #16
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I know this beat haha, when I was in livin legends we were gon use it. but that crews gay anyway I think you'd do better then them anywho. the hook is pretty good. flow and emotion is good. delivery is very good, keeps the track in place specially on the hook, so overall kon you did good one of your better tracks I've heard in awhile.
prospect must be a cat you know in the steel town but yo hes dope I love his voice, I can imagine him spittin fast as fuck and soundin dope. his lyrics aint to bad could be better, he's to gangster he should go underground wit his lyrics he coudl tear up a beat like this he has that voice.

anyway this is one dope ass track.

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Old 10-25-05, 06:31 AM   #17
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lol @ he's too gangsta. thanks for the feedback. I'll get at you on the feedback in a few
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Old 10-25-05, 06:32 AM   #18
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I know this beat haha, when I was in livin legends we were gon use it. but that crews gay anyway I think you'd do better then them anywho. the hook is pretty good. flow and emotion is good. delivery is very good, keeps the track in place specially on the hook, so overall kon you did good one of your better tracks I've heard in awhile.
prospect must be a cat you know in the steel town but yo hes dope I love his voice, I can imagine him spittin fast as fuck and soundin dope. his lyrics aint to bad could be better, he's to gangster he should go underground wit his lyrics he coudl tear up a beat like this he has that voice.

anyway this is one dope ass track.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212599

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Old 10-25-05, 06:34 AM   #19
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alright famz, thanx ^ .if you have any songs ill return the favour.
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Old 10-25-05, 04:06 PM   #20
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hook is pretty good.....

flow is pretty good....adlibs are startin to get a little repetitive..., overall good
you ahd some nice lines here and there..solid drop
verse

hook again..

next verse...phone just rang so cant listen to it now
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Old 10-25-05, 06:38 PM   #21
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thanx for the ffeedback famz...
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Old 10-26-05, 07:27 AM   #22
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anywayz lemme get more feed on this.
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Old 10-26-05, 06:08 PM   #23
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track hit 324 plays in 2 days
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Old 10-27-05, 05:38 PM   #24
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track it 653.

probably the last time I up this. Drop feed on this Nuccaz!
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Old 10-27-05, 10:07 PM   #25
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this was an aight track...i think prospekt outshined kontroverzy on here...kon ya flow was a bit jerky at times...other then that it woudl get back on point...lyrics are aight...mic presence and shit is cool...all u really need to work on is ya flow a lil bit but other then that everything else was pretty good...pros...i think u shined on this track...ya flow and everything was on point...really nothing negative bout ya verse except the lyrics...both of ya guys lyrics could have been a bit better...overall this was a decent track
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Old 10-28-05, 07:49 AM   #26
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word. respect on that. my boy prospekt has that sick voice.
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Old 10-29-05, 08:16 AM   #27
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oh my lord. 2000 views..
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Old 10-29-05, 10:19 PM   #28
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okay overall track pretty good production could use work but u said u recorded it in the studio too so props i didnt like the little ko sound lol
flow pretty good stayed on point for the most part
hook its ok not that great lyrically but it a little banger definately catchy
presence you have good presence i can totally tell your from canada lol love ur voice
prospekz i actually like his verse more to be honest but both were good
pretty good song i d/l ill definately buy the album when it comes out
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Old 10-30-05, 07:07 AM   #29
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thanx ma i appreciate it...i'll get at you...
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