Those line's were dope atty'. Your emotion was pretty strong, felt that in the quoted lines. Flow was pretty consistant, but your verse had a poetic feeling to it > an OM.

Valor, Nice drop, however I feel you could have improved upon your rhyme scheme and vocab, a little. your flow was pretty good, as was your imagery.

All in all, nice collab

I wasnt in Katrina but I went there to help..

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