Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Uncsripted-Your verse was quit good for a new cat...you had some good concepts and good wordplay problem is i dont think it flowed right...and breaking it down..it all comes down to flow.....if it dont flow...it aint god...nuff said..........

Tha 1 an onlii b-your verse was mediocore...ive seen better from you....you had some good concepts worded poorly but it flowed good...overall punches in this battle were not too good...but it really came down to flwo cuz everything else was missing.......

v/tha 1 an onlii

b

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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote:1 and onlii

The one and onlii
Yours was longer and he kept up your scheme scheme. Granted you jumped around a lot and didnt flow from one punch to the other but still its better than the stuff Undescried provided;

Best line:
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*

Worst Line:
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed


Undescribed: Nobody really takes their profiles serious and thats all you went on i think it was a dumb way to find information to write a verse. Your rhyme was good , there just wasnt a lot of complex words and it was kinda jabby more then punches. I only really liked your first line.

Best line:
This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*

Worst Line:
is punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**

Thanx for tha votez...uppin for more on this shit homiez...HOLLA!!!....1

Voted For: Unscripted

Ehh.........not from this site and so far haven't really seen anything spectacular in the Text department but Onlii B came harder with his verse with a betta consistancy and vocab even with his punches this wasn't a complete slaughter very close but Script you came with played lines and bad personals.......sorry vote goes to B

Unexplained vote removed

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shit.............my fault polled wrong...........not from this site still new.........but if you can get it fix'd then thas wassup if not the my fault

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Uppidy Up Up Uppin for 1 last vote on this shit right herr...C'mon letz close this shit and declare a winner...1