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Old 11-07-05, 09:33 PM   #1
Pay-pa Jam
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Let's get it Crackin in this Bi.........!!!

IP: C9F9 DA0B

im ready to shut the game down this year///

i got the fif here///

so if u want to die lil homie u can"click here"///

the flow a weapon so the rymes is lethal///

and ya money stay short like chinese people///

call me A-Keys, i squeeze u fallin///

holes in your throwback, u a be bible ballin///

messin wit weak cats......i been throw///

imma leave your body in shook like the soul on your gym shoe///

back in the mud///

face takin a slug///

he can vacate in a lake of his blood///

i got a lil cash now niggas trynna rob me///

cuz im bout them bills like Cilton and Cosby///

my right hand so good i dont need the left///

i'll shoot u in the legs u can bleed to death///

14 minus the fif the nina left///

now faces turn blue like they hold their breath

its the site of death when niggas see me///

cuz ya chain get lefted like J-Legend C.D.///

you aint no killa..im runnin from what///

talk slick u gon find your self under ya truck///

u c me i dont have a problem clappin a snicth///

wrap his face up he can take a nap in a dicth///
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Old 11-07-05, 09:39 PM   #2
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You need two links to feedback you gave on niggas raps *cough click neighborhood sniper in my sig* but got some good shit there let's battle, I'd suggest you make all ya lines longer but other than that punch-lines hittin well.
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