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Oreo | 2 | 28.57% | |
Daubs | 5 | 71.43% | |
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11-13-05, 04:20 PM | #40 | |
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Voted For: Daubs
oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart put your brain on the road so you can get street smart bad wording, rhymes dont need to be exact (so u coulda ended wit street smartS instead) decent concept couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart bad setup, good punch (rip dale earnhart ) i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes nice punch, i aint feelin the whole "u aint gangsta" approach, but u still had good wordplay you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players really badly worded, not too good of a punch either on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster isnt blockbuster a compliment? i think u were trying to make it a follow-up to ur first line, but it didnt come out very well daubs: ts no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting where'd the caterin line come from? n the oreop thing WAS nameplay, but u need to remember to make the name part of the punch, just sayin his name isnt a diss __________________________________________________ Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands punch is ight, dont like the setup Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops not too god, needs more of a punch Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time lol u worded it wrong, shoulda been "cuz" instead of "like or suttin like that" Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's your punches are too complicated, n dont hit very hard, wordplay isnt everythin Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations lmao, great setup Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals another good punch When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume ok punch, but it doesnt really rhyme When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet not much of a punch, again too much wordplay __________________________________________________ He the only person to crash partys...before they even started And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied (clubs are a biscuit too) not a good closer, setup wasnt really a punch [b]overall neither verse was great, but daubs stayed fairly consistent (no horrible lines) in a long verse, and oreo didnt stay consistent in a short verse oreo had the best punches, but his verse really fell apart at the end v/daubs |
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