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Old 11-19-05, 12:13 AM   #1
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Post gods of newest agent

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-intro-

man fuck all these whack mc's
ya stupid muthafuckas str8 drivin me mad
introducing allik war newest member 2 gods of war
str8 da game wit no lube's....ha ha ha ha ha check it out niggaz

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im openin a can of whoop ass,
to these niggaz spittin they blue grass,
open ya books n pay attetion class,
killin da mic da only way you'll pass,
these rappaz flow losin weight like slim fast//

i took a step in da game n took a mile,
i stole da game wit a flow steel,
n rode da beat like a set of wheel's,
the socom of rapverse like a navy seal//

note 2 rapverse community im tryin sumtin new wit da way i write my bars will finish song 2marrow gotta finish gettin ready 4 work peace
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Old 11-19-05, 01:25 AM   #2
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>.>.............Im sorry to say........Im officialy Leaving Gods of War........Im just gonna be on my own for now....or atleast get wit a crew thats on its feet and all........I know its a new crew and I aint da best text head but a nigga gotta have its standars specialy since yall lettin this cat in with the intro then this...........*shakes head* Im out of Gods of War.....BigCity No disrespect but im out dog 1



Lets see how far i can stretch this

Elevate alot....work on your multi's,similies, rap concept, punchlines, rhyme shceme, better vocab, if you want it enough you can do it.....because i've seen other people....Like K-Trini he used to be wack as shit back in the day....now dude is nice and i got more respect for dude....anways just elevate....
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Old 11-19-05, 08:44 PM   #3
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yo young dollar ya dumb ass peep da fact i specsifically say i was tryin sumtin new u wqanna talk shit wait til u peep my never die alone om n my try out verse for gods of war stupid youngin ive been doin this rap shit since i was 15 years old im 21 now i know plenty n probly more than u n half da peeps on dis site bout multie,punchlines,wordplay n all basic fundamentals of flow dumbass........so b4 u go runnin yo :
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Old 11-19-05, 08:58 PM   #4
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peep my post's on om n tell me again if u got balls bigga gods of war jus choosin lame niggaz nigga cuz like i said ive been in da game or minute so dont doubt me unless u got reason 2 next time read son
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Old 11-19-05, 10:31 PM   #5
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Drop two links or this will be closed
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Old 11-19-05, 10:55 PM   #6
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yo links? links 4 wut when dis rule come 2 effect? wtf y u closin my shit dawg warn a muthafucka n let him kno wut da new dumbass rules r b4 u go closin shit damnit fuck
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Old 11-20-05, 12:11 AM   #7
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Wow...


lmaoo

*smh*
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Old 11-20-05, 03:34 AM   #8
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lol atcha ass keepin gettin ya Om's closed..........just learn and listen and drop 2 links in ya om's....damn....and dont think just because your older your nicer than me....you say you've done this shit for 6 years since you was 15...i been doing this shit since i was 8.....not great back when i was 8 but i new da basics of a rhyme schem and shit....And if your saying your trying something new and dont judge you from that......drop what ya good at and let niggas peep you on that level cuz if not i just see that as a lame ass excuse homie.......just elevate


Anyways I peeped ya other OM's they alright but im still leavin Gods Of War...try this making my own crew shit with snipes...shit dont work then I'll just be by myself............ Anyways stay up
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