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Old 11-16-05, 09:07 PM   #1
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Old 11-20-05, 09:27 PM   #2
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Upppppnnnn for feedback!
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Old 11-21-05, 12:51 AM   #3
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yo... you should tell kats taht ya link is in ya sig... that's prolly why no one checking ya shyt

yeah... beat is on some evil grimy brooklyn underground shyt!!!
mad energy on this joint... lyrics is tight.... hook is of da hook.... deep.... liking the message ya snuck in there... sounds real gritty on some socio-political shyt.... bush references.... all that.... werd.... quality was good.... musta been in a studio.... overdub on ya chorus was a lil loud but other than that it was straight.... you should post more....werd!!!
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Old 11-21-05, 10:00 AM   #4
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Ya flow is hot... You have a nice voice for rappin', it's addictive. Ya chorus a lil' bit loud, but a good set up for a chorus.. = ) This track overall is real hot, I'm feeling ya delivery, and you REAL comfortable on the mic, we gotta collab someday.
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Old 11-22-05, 09:38 AM   #5
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Much love to y'all! IG and Lady Fiya we should definitely do a collab I think it'll be serious!
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Old 11-27-05, 09:19 PM   #6
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