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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-20-05 at 01:03 PM

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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-05 10:23 PM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-05 10:27 PM.

So what if your records nice,wonder why i aint carin?
Cuz we all kno imma smash Triple faster than Hank Aaron
You aint hard fam i can see through yo tough shit
You're like a cheap condom,you'll pop when u fucked wit
I wasnt gonna battle ... But i decided to drop ten
Cuz your Barz faker then the ones Ysdat got locked in
Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston
It gets critical when my niggas start throwin the pistol in
Mark the date Nov.19 is when the Triple N's (ends)

It's been a while,a lil rusty. But it's all good ...

Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam
You beatin' me? HA!!......well, I know you wish you could
So, I'll apoligize now.....
......For slappin u back to when katz thought u was good
Since I ripped ya ass last year, you stayed witta prollum
Jus accept da fact....
....Ya got no business here like martha stewart in harlem
I feel bad tho, cuz murkin' da handicapped jus aint right
Dats why I tied 1 arm behind my back to even da fight
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214978
Damn! cripplin' da crippled...now trip has up! & dun it
matic asked for it....
He need to do hip hop like his name & move backwards from it

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Voted For: Triple_N

aiight i'm coo with both, so this is honest........


soo umm auto:

So what if your records nice,wonder why i aint carin?
Cuz we all kno imma smash Triple faster than Hank Aaron
[h]ehh, nice try at wordplay....... but it's aiight..... 5/10 [/b]
You aint hard fam i can see through yo tough shit
You're like a cheap condom,you'll pop when u fucked wit
[h] decent... could have been better....... 4/10 [/b]
I wasnt gonna battle ... But i decided to drop ten
Cuz your Barz faker then the ones Ysdat got locked in
jail bar lines are really played......... 3/10
Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston
ehh.... ok........... 5/10
It gets critical when my niggas start throwin the pistol in
Mark the date Nov.19 is when the Triple N's (ends)
ok nameplay....... 4/10

It's been a while,a lil rusty. But it's all good ...

overall, your shit was decent. 30 out of 50 is what i see as a good verse. but yea, you a lil rusty. Seen you drop bette.r not bad overall tho. keep workin'.

now to triple:
Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam
lol nice wordplay......... 6/10
You beatin' me? HA!!......well, I know you wish you could
So, I'll apoligize now.....
......For slappin u back to when katz thought u was good
lol nice. liked it..... 6/10
Since I ripped ya ass last year, you stayed witta prollum
Jus accept da fact....
....Ya got no business here like martha stewart in harlem
lol that one made me laugh........ 7/10
I feel bad tho, cuz murkin' da handicapped jus aint right
Dats why I tied 1 arm behind my back to even da fight
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214978
rofl........ dope line. lmao...... 9/10
Damn! cripplin' da crippled...now trip has up! & dun it
matic asked for it....
He need to do hip hop like his name & move backwards from it
nice nameflip........... 7/10

35/50....... overal........ you stayed consistent with the funny punches and that one with the link sealed the deal. tight verse, man.. good shit

Overall, I think triple got this, cuz his punches were more consistent. And he had the only line worhth mentioning. That one about the beyonce thread.

coo battle tho. props to both

v/Triple

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Voted For: Triple_N

Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam
that one was pretty clever i liked that one lol
You beatin' me? HA!!......well, I know you wish you could
So, I'll apoligize now.....
......For slappin u back to when katz thought u was good
damn that was hard lol
Since I ripped ya ass last year, you stayed witta prollum
Jus accept da fact....
....Ya got no business here like martha stewart in harlem
this was aight wasnt feelin that one that much
I feel bad tho, cuz murkin' da handicapped jus aint right
Dats why I tied 1 arm behind my back to even da fight
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214978
Damn! cripplin' da crippled...now trip has up! & dun it
matic asked for it....
He need to do hip hop like his name & move backwards from it
i like the ending it ended it gud
your verse was tight nice personals and punchlines..the flow to me was off on that prollum line iono thats the only that messed me up but it was gud overall bout 8/10

So what if your records nice,wonder why i aint carin?
Cuz we all kno imma smash Triple faster than Hank Aaron
You aint hard fam i can see through yo tough shit
You're like a cheap condom,you'll pop when u fucked wit
I wasnt gonna battle ... But i decided to drop ten
Cuz your Barz faker then the ones Ysdat got locked in
Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston
It gets critical when my niggas start throwin the pistol in
Mark the date Nov.19 is when the Triple N's (ends)

aight i really thought the beginning was weak as hell seriously that like ruined it for but overall you had a gud structure which really dont mean nuttin to me just makes the verse look clean....personals were str8 and punchline was cool overall id say bout a 7.....i believe you when you sed its been awhile word out

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Voted For: Triple_N

Triple_N

Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam
^hmmmm first line decent set-up, nothing too special though. Last line okay, good wordplay but nothing actually hardhitting 6/10

You beatin' me? HA!!......well, I know you wish you could
So, I'll apoligize now.....
......For slappin u back to when katz thought u was good
^hehe, I like the last line, nice finish-off, solid stuff 6/10

Since I ripped ya ass last year, you stayed witta prollum
Jus accept da fact....
....Ya got no business here like martha stewart in harlem
^good wordplay formed into nice punch, good bar 7/10

I feel bad tho, cuz murkin' da handicapped jus aint right
Dats why I tied 1 arm behind my back to even da fight
^bleh not really feelin it actually, it's decent bar though 4/10

Damn! cripplin' da crippled...now trip has up! & dun it
matic asked for it....
He need to do hip hop like his name & move backwards from it
^rofl @ last line, that killed this bar, nice shit 8/10

Total: 31/50 = 62%, quite solid. I feel like you could've worded some things differently to make em hit harder though. Had some good concepts though, flow was good, vocab was decent, punches were overall okay.

AutoMATIK™

So what if your records nice,wonder why i aint carin?
Cuz we all kno imma smash Triple faster than Hank Aaron
^uhm no...pure self-glorification basically...comparison was aight though 4/10

You aint hard fam i can see through yo tough shit
You're like a cheap condom,you'll pop when u fucked wit
^haha, i'm diggin the last line, first one is basic though 6/10

I wasnt gonna battle ... But i decided to drop ten
Cuz your Barz faker then the ones Ysdat got locked in
^hahah, funny last line, set-up could've been better though 8/10

Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston
^self-glorifying but decent comparison in last line though 6/10

It gets critical when my niggas start throwin the pistol in
Mark the date Nov.19 is when the Triple N's (ends)
^decent nameplay but it's done before and the first line's bleh 6/10

Total: 30/50 = 60%, got some nice comparisons in there, i'm loving the Ysdat-line, overall your set-ups kinda ruin it here and there though, if u upped those u would've won this imo...

Solid battle, not best but decent shit...Triple takes this by a few, both were around same level on this one...

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Damn..good battle here.
Both came strong.
Matik had a better flow.Triple N used the 3 line method for some of his bars..to try and make it "look" like it flows 'n shit..but when reading it,it didn't flow good.

Both came with some nice punches too.I was cracking up when I read Matik's line about Ysdat in jail.Triple N came with some wittyness in there too.Like the martha stewart one.But he also came with some boring lines.Like the one about tying an arm around his back..and the closer..

I gotta go with Automatik

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Overall:
Rusty and all...as u say...ur verse was better...IMO.
Ur flow dominated, mind u. ..i had to read both verses over again quite a few times here to pick the winner...but matik ur flows, punches and structure was more fluid.....Triple...ur opener was awesome, much better..then died down.

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Matik Best Lines:
Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston

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Triple Best Lines:
Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam

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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Trip
No offense man, but you came off a lil weak this time, I do thought this was a real good battle and you did come in wit some dope punchlines but some shit was self glorified and I know it dont matter but to me it does. A battle is to mainly diss them which you did but not good enough. to many celeb lines and what not, like off the start you were good and you got rushed probably or somin which made it seem weak in the last 2 snares.
anyway man no hate or anything I just thought you could being it even better.

AutoMaktik
old old, you are rusty but I thought you had a more steady verse. like what I mean is you kept it solid wit punches mostly. the punchlines were hittin pretty good and everything. I just basically thought trip didnt try. if I were you and you want a better battle you should ask trip to do this again cuz I know he's better and so are you. anyway good battle to both.

1 luv y'all

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