....chorus...::no good::

1st rapper: u dun have the right kinda voice to do something like that sound like ur getting choked...but eh the flow switches so much i cant realli get a good understand on what ur tryn to do.....

2nd rapper: ....ur better then teh first guy it was str8 ur flow had meaning u fell off beat a lil but thaz koo u sound like a beginner (if ur not sorry mean no offense) but ya i liked ur verse better then the first....keep tryn

Hopefully u will do better next time

"Remember" i am not an asshole lol i have to post thsi to everyone im just critical aight ? so try harder consider thsi NEGATIVE MOTIVATION to try harder and shut me up

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