Ahh i like that beat...pretty good choice...

1st Guy - Ahh..i like , nice flow rides the beat really well, really though the lyrics/content of teh verse is really night and even incorperates a little vocab and complexity which i like alot...good job to this dude...the only thing that could be changed is that a like 1 spot the beat overrides the voice slightly..could just be my speakers but thats what i hear...

Hook - I Dont really liek the hook..i think you guys could have done better with that..and the transition from person to person is kinda off cuz you just pop up and it doesnt sound exactly right...

Second Guy - Content was pretty nice , sometimes generic but overally the lyrics were there, the flow gets off in a few spots but for the most part you got the flow and the presence picks up that also...Turn down mic a little bit because it makes it sound bad when your so Loud that its hard to understand...

The end sample fits well..the only thing is that the track just turns off..it would sound better if you faded taht sample out or something cuz when it just turns off it takes a certain finality from it...

overally though pretty nice track...the 1st guy was really nice in starting it off and last guy did pretty well bringing it home just a few things wrong..

8.7/10

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