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Old 12-15-05, 12:34 AM   #1
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"Unfuckwitable"...Young Gutta, Joon, Limited Edition, and Tha Q! Dope collab.

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Word...

Hook: Tha Q
1st Verse: Joon
2nd Verse: Gutta
3rd Verse: Lim Edish

Word...Joon is a friend of Gutta's...but he's dope.

Word, leave links and wilol return the favor.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217153
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Old 12-15-05, 12:58 AM   #2
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typing as I listen.....hook is ah'ight....coulda been stronger...the melody of it coulda stronger if its melody was stronger it would really own but it was ah'ight, as well as if was mixed better it was layered but effectless it was jus a slightly more dubbed version of the verses didn't really separate itself an the hook is the meat of the track so def coulda been strong......ok first verse....delivery is blan....flow is very every other emceeish...he sounds like another mixtape nigga nothing jumps out about dude....lyrics...punches was real weak...had sum wordplay attempts but it was jus similies worded slightly different...ok second verse....flow is koo...delivery is decent..its animated but not accessible....lyrics again is weak...lyrics was reall disappointing on this verse...again another everyday sounding kat....ok 3rd...quality drops from the others on this verse...an vocals is a bit low....flow is koo coulda been a lil more creative...delivery wasn't bad....but coulda been more animated...lyrics couldn't really catch due to vol....this sounds like an east coast mixtape track done by none east coast catz....like it jus doesn't sound like this is a style yall are accustomtoo especially on Q an limited part...def outta character an it showed....other two dudes fit right into that mold...an I was not feeling them at all no hate jus realness...beat was ill yall shoulda hit it harder IMO...but its all good...be ez...keep dropping.........1
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Old 12-15-05, 01:23 AM   #3
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aight peepin now

Production:The Production was good the mixing on the beat is bad :7/10

Flow:The Q killed the hook:8/10,The first person up had a nice flow i was feelin that but his quality was bad.....but it wasn't 2 bad:7.5/10,Limited you had a ncie flow like usual:8/10

Emotion:Ya'll rode the beat pretty damn well i was feelin it all the way around:8/10 for all of ya'll

Pressense:Agaain ya'll ready caught my pressense its real nice on the beat:7.5/10 for all of ya'll

Overall:This song was pretty good not 2 bad keep droppin all ya'll:7.8/10
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Old 12-15-05, 05:44 AM   #4
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listenin....tha q...what happened to hte quality? its acceptable but the hook is nice...joon i aint heard u before, u are good...i like ure voice...flowing well...i like that God ghostwritin line..dope...quality is not bad...presence can be upped it was delivered...the hook is nice...nice lil catchy shit...gutta...flow is crazy on this...lyrics are kl...presence is koo...LE...volume a lil low...flow is nice, lyrics are koo...and then ure presence was good but u gotta upp that volume a bit....lol at that pen line i like that...nice joint
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Old 12-15-05, 07:55 AM   #5
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beats Dope

Hooks Dope Good Shit Q
But Your Quals A bit Low

1st Cat

Flows Nice

Dleiverys koo Could be upped A lil
Emotions Ok
Love THis Accent Lol



Lyrics Are Koo

Aight Hook Again

Gutta I Think:
Dope Flow
Deliverys Koo
Quals Koo
emotions Koo

Hook....


L.E:

Aight

FLows Dope

Deliverys koo

Emotions Good

Lyrics Are good

Prensec Is Nice

I Love Your Voice I DUnno Y Lol

Good Track


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Old 12-15-05, 11:37 PM   #6
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A'ight thanks to all...

Uppin'...
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Old 12-15-05, 11:47 PM   #7
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thnx for the responses, and Triple N.. lol, I'm from New York, 149th and Lenox fam. So there is no fake shit in this. And it was a mixtape type track not really set at an objective. Thanks for the opinions though.
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Old 12-18-05, 10:53 PM   #9
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Thanks...

Uppin'...shit's been slept on.
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