Good Emotion. The Concept is played and your approach to the Topic is played and not creative. I've seen these kinda of Topics been done before. You got Emotion and flow but you need some meataphors and similies, some wordplay to spice your piece up. Overall this was alright like 'rex' said it should've been longer but more adding features to the verse. Overall Keep writing.

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