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Old 12-23-05, 03:18 PM   #1
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O step dad why won't you die
I can't take it when you lie
I wanna stick a needle in ur eye
For all the times you made me cry
Your a person I really really hate
I hope this song tempts ur fate
cuz im sick to death of you
I'ma give you the verbal abuse
Your just here to annoy me
all u do is just sit n watch tv
Your fat ass is just a joke
inside I wanna leave u choked
I really hate listening to ur face
why don't you move from our place
Cuz you ain't really wanted here
You've made me wanna kill u this year
I ain't gonnna make myself tear
over someone thats just a queer
You should really watch dat mouth
B4 I tear your adams apple out
I hate breathing the same air
I really dont give one care
But when you make me dispair
I'ma tear up up which is only fair
Don't ever try to talk down
cuz ur sounding like a clown
And don't ever call me any names
I'm sick n tired of your games

fuckin pussy
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Old 12-23-05, 03:28 PM   #2
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Drop two links or this will be closed
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Old 12-23-05, 03:47 PM   #3
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basic rhyme scheme, boring actually to read because it wasn't deep enough, i think that you could have worked on the topic more by going into depth and improving your rhyme scheme.......
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Old 12-23-05, 05:17 PM   #4
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Really simple and really boring. Didn't change it up at all, and just kinda is like...ok. I feel I could have written this, which means the emotion is bad cuz I don't even have a step dad.
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Old 12-23-05, 05:34 PM   #5
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lol @ ur suckage
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Old 12-23-05, 05:47 PM   #6
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fuck you..................................
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Old 12-23-05, 06:22 PM   #7
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heh...NOW he wants to get creative....
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Old 12-23-05, 08:07 PM   #8
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O step dad why won't you die


fuckin pussy


You want him to die,but you won't kill him..

And you call him pussy?

You gay
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Old 12-23-05, 08:13 PM   #9
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natural killer i think everyone on this site thinks ur gay so don't call me it that word suits ya better. why don't you shit off and die cuz you bore me.
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Old 12-24-05, 01:45 AM   #10
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basic rhyme scheme, boring actually to read because it wasn't deep enough, i think that you could have worked on the topic more by going into depth and improving your rhyme scheme.......


word on that^^

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Old 12-24-05, 01:59 AM   #11
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I Agree U Could Of Done Better With Type Of Song But I Feel Ya Though I Hated My Step Dad...so I Kicked Him Out The House..then Spent Oru Rent Money N We Got Evicted...then My Mom Chose Him Over Me N Left Me 4 The Streets So Now I Feel The Same 4 Both Of Them
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