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thurdshift 0 0%
talon 5 100.00%
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Old 12-04-05, 12:29 PM   #1
talon
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thurdshift vs talon

IP: 9E2F CDE8

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Old 12-04-05, 12:37 PM   #2
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thurdshift has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-05 12:37 PM.
 
Old 12-04-05, 12:49 PM   #3
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talon has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-05 12:49 PM.
 
Old 12-04-05, 12:50 PM   #4
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i dont care who you are, talon brings hurt to all men
you may be the best at beats....but im better at giving them
you can pretend to try all you want, you'll never get it mastered
thurdshifts himself to fit in...but we know he's just standard
im not even trying, while thurd's place wont last here long
my punches keep coming, leave his eyes nice black and bronze
his raps have no point, so i dont hesitate with my spear
he couldn't snatch the win, and he's the biggest pussy here
you're whack as fuck kid, pay attention, listen to me talk
my punches ring your head so much, you'll be able to beat box

done.
 
Old 12-04-05, 12:59 PM   #5
thurdshift
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just watch FAG, i bet i'll have you waivin a white FLAG//
my flow is like good dro soothin lungs with a nice DRAG//

dont act BAD, punches hit harder than airplane JETLAG//
why battle this clown, two syllables'll get his ass tattered and toe TAGGED//

my wisdom is in my bars, that's 10 lines more than u ever HAD//
deez niggaz are what they eat, an talon's been tyraniclly tea BAGGED//

get even dont get MAD just realize i pocess what you lack LAD//
datts real skill, i rhyme eager u rhyme juz cuz its proclaimed as the next FAD//

i need 50 feet back back an ponder how u just got HAD//
fuck it i'll do it for you...da mic's good, but ya style's gone BAD
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Old 12-04-05, 01:08 PM   #6
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good shit....uppin this hurr rite quikk drop a good vote
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Old 12-07-05, 10:00 PM   #7
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uppin this rite here....come on folk dont sleep!!!
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Old 12-07-05, 10:24 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for talon

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polls............................................. ...
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Old 12-08-05, 12:24 PM   #9
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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Voted For: talon

talon - You flowed well, your punches where good.

Best Line - i dont care who you are, talon brings hurt to all men
you may be the best at beats....but im better at giving them

Worst Line - im not even trying, while thurd's place wont last here long
my punches keep coming, leave his eyes nice black and bronze

thurdshift - Your rhymes where basics, work on vocab, punchlines where ok.

Best Line - dont act BAD, punches hit harder than airplane JETLAG//
why battle this clown, two syllables'll get his ass tattered and toe TAGGED//

Worst Line - just watch FAG, i bet i'll have you waivin a white FLAG//
my flow is like good dro soothin lungs with a nice DRAG//

OVERALL - This was a weak battle, both of you need to work on your punches. Talon gets the vote tho becuase his punches where hitten hard.

Vote - Talon

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Old 12-17-05, 01:10 PM   #10
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bump this.........................................
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Old 12-23-05, 11:42 AM   #11
talon
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upping this............................................
 
Old 12-28-05, 01:55 PM   #12
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bumping...........................................
 
Old 12-28-05, 05:01 PM   #13
Tech (banned)
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From: Long Beach
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Voted For: talon

talon got this, although both came weak but had he had a nice play on your name
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Old 12-29-05, 02:51 PM   #14
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From: Adanac
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go talon, go............................................
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Old 12-31-05, 11:59 AM   #15
noname
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Voted For: talon

just watch FAG, i bet i'll have you waivin a white FLAG//
my flow is like good dro soothin lungs with a nice DRAG//
...wack
dont act BAD, punches hit harder than airplane JETLAG//
why battle this clown, two syllables'll get his ass tattered and toe TAGGED//
...Weak
my wisdom is in my bars, that's 10 lines more than u ever HAD//
deez niggaz are what they eat, an talon's been tyraniclly tea BAGGED//
...Poor wordplay
get even dont get MAD just realize i pocess what you lack LAD//
datts real skill, i rhyme eager u rhyme juz cuz its proclaimed as the next FAD//
...Ight
i need 50 feet back back an ponder how u just got HAD//
fuck it i'll do it for you...da mic's good, but ya style's gone BAD
...Wack,forced rhyme too

i dont care who you are, talon brings hurt to all men
you may be the best at beats....but im better at giving them
....good
you can pretend to try all you want, you'll never get it mastered
thurdshifts himself to fit in...but we know he's just standard
....Ight
im not even trying, while thurd's place wont last here long
my punches keep coming, leave his eyes nice black and bronze
..Wack
his raps have no point, so i dont hesitate with my spear
he couldn't snatch the win, and he's the biggest pussy here
...Good
you're whack as fuck kid, pay attention, listen to me talk
my punches ring your head so much, you'll be able to beat box
...Good

Ight,talon wins.
Thurd didn't have anything good.seemed like he focused on keepin' his rhyme scheme.It was one sllyable,but he still seemed to be struggling.And also,drug lines are played.

Vote:Talon

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