i wouldn't doubt it if that act is treason
im still waiting for the day they put a tax on breathin


Realist lines you've ever dropped.

Concept wasnt too bad, which creates reason for the emotion... as to why you wrote it. Some people talk, some people do. I hate fake people. Flow was fairly good, vocab small. However the overall message outweighs your flaws in my opinion. Not your best drop ever... but a damn good relayinto your train of thought bro.

Keep it up.

Peace.

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Very good....

Great emotion throughout this, it has a great message, basically it is a real piece - nicely constructed, some very good lines (like the one Mentalz quoted)...flow was very good...I cant emphasise how much you can feel your emotion in this....but overall this was very good....

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