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Old 01-12-06, 05:39 PM   #1
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Soundclick in the sig short song quik two verses with a quik hook i think its like 2:15-2:30 listen and holla back at me



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Old 01-12-06, 07:42 PM   #2
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1st off, your soundclick freezes my comp up everytime I click on it...Something promps my DAP to download something, which freezes it up


Beat is generic to me...something that seems like I've heard you rap to before


Levels all seem fine


flow is good...but not as hot as the last joint I heard you on


Screwed hook is decent...


interesting echo effects u used...I liked em, generally speaking


good track tho


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Old 01-12-06, 07:48 PM   #3
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The beat is coo...flow and delivery are good...lyrics is str8...the hook is coo...second verse is nice...pretty coo peice man keep iy up.

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Old 01-13-06, 06:06 PM   #4
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^^^^^thanks for the reply
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Old 01-14-06, 06:26 AM   #5
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Hmm

Beat Nice..

I like your Style man..like kinda old schooly you know

Lyrics are kooo

Deliverys nice

Flows koo,fell off once i heard

Hooks nice

im likin the effects

Emotions koo

Presence nice,like how u presentin yourself

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8/10

Good track feelin it
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Old 01-14-06, 07:08 AM   #6
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yo man, track is dope feeling it intro is cool. flows very fluent keep it going man
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Old 01-14-06, 03:00 PM   #7
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^appreciated
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Old 01-14-06, 07:59 PM   #8
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nice beat,flow is hot,lyrics cool,good multis n shit man,oh shit..chorus is nice man,nice come in w the 2nd verse man...i'll let u borrow my padded room n white coat later yo...i dont need it for now,i gota write this shit real fast LOL...yea man..good track bro
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Old 01-15-06, 05:16 AM   #9
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listenin....lovin the beat..flow is dope man...real gutter flow..delivered good fo this type track....u used sum gd effects right here....liked the hoook too...2nd verse is really nice too..lyrics are really nice...likin this track dawg...hawt..1
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Old 01-15-06, 06:10 PM   #10
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good looks patna
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