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Old 02-01-06, 01:17 PM   #1
J.D
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Never change feat Snypa

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yoo, me and Snypa did a little collab over the "never change" beat by Jay-z. this is some hot shit right here yo

check it out:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459856

1st verse-me
2nd verse-Snypa

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219564
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219025

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Old 02-01-06, 01:34 PM   #2
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uppin for feed....................................
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Old 02-01-06, 01:41 PM   #3
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One Mic - You had an ok verse, some ok rhymes. Your flow was decent and it had ok quality.
5/10

Snypa - You had a good flow in that verse, I liked your rhymes, your quality was good. Stay Up. I liked the if I fall off I'll quit rap line.
7.5/10

OVERALL SONG - It was an ok song. Snypa owned it with his verse. One Mic you need to work on your flow abit, and get your rhymes to sound better and up your vocab.
6/10
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Old 02-01-06, 01:42 PM   #4
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aight thanx for the feed man. uppin for more..................
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Old 02-01-06, 01:47 PM   #5
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one mic.....................

voice is kinda plain but ight.............

flow was on and off.........ok for most part.......................

no pressence or emotion....................

lyrics were good............................

delevery was ight.......................

snypa..............................

good flow...............................

good delevery ......................

nice pressence and emotion..................

quality was ight on this..............................

notta bad track though
7/10 keep up
one mic return tha favour
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Old 02-01-06, 03:21 PM   #6
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thanx for the feed yo. uppin......................
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Old 02-02-06, 11:34 AM   #7
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uppin this........................................
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Old 02-02-06, 01:55 PM   #8
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bummmmmmmmppppppppppp....why this bein slept on?
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Old 02-02-06, 03:21 PM   #9
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aight dis beat choice is nice...1st cat not really feelin u dawg lyricz is ok flows decent as well as delivery they both need sum work really a lil polishing in those areas will help u out alot...2nd cat lyricz is coo flow & delivery are sharper then da 1st dude...overall tho dis song was decent really could've been betta...but its all about elevation nahmean ya'll...keep it up...

rtf...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196
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Old 02-02-06, 09:12 PM   #10
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aiight, thanks for the feed bro
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