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02-17-06, 10:10 AM | #1 | ||||
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Lady Lyrical - Notorius killerz Tale
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NOTORIUS KILLAZ TALE
Blade lifted steadily from the cold corroding concrete Dressed in black, demons coercing the mind to be discreet As I make ma way to a new day, killing displays my intention A sinister passion erupts from the depths of this prehension Ma ruptured heart departs from this deprieved society Midnight,I make ma way with one objective that’s breakin me To take whts rightfully mines, an unjust soul no eye has seen Invsible from social circles dispersin to places ive never been A villanous monster ive become anguish empowers on my veins Bleedin pain I still ponda for peace to get me through this day My Mind inclines the revenge of a tyrant who bursts with wealth Took away da lives of ma family jus to increase his boost of stealth Now stands, this renegade no fear is left, but my blade now bleeds I take no heed just killin sprees to make these bitches see The pain inflicted , mind depicted when visions start to emerge I chose the path of bitterness, for a rightful cause I now diverge People think how violent I am when I murder an line the chalk Of the victims ive killed,cats ive thrilled to show which way I walk Some say im a killer but fate has lead me to this thought Every action poses a reaction now I let my knife talk Approached the area of my victim to be, im grippin to my blade Now ready to avenge the deaths as power lurks in this renegade Steadily as I cross like a ninja through barricades of disapproval My conscience bares no sympathy , I now urge for his removal Readily I prepare, through the murky air I come, but I do not warn A duty I must I must perform, must-do norm, my anger not yet torn Finally I arrive excited, my intentions higher than what I expected My conscience is now clear of my prime objective, an I accept it I reached up for my icy blade , an grabbed his lean neck From behind, I left no time an slowly forced it till he was dead Now fully complete but my heart still bleeds for the pious souls Took avenge but still im lonely my heart is full of thrustin holes The ambition ive longed to achieve, has finally reached my waters Finished with the slaughter, now I should move on, an plus I orta Overcome the misery that plagued my heart an plagued soul Reached the last chapter , now the legend is fortold No longer can these cats phase me , I made it clear Reached my peak, of wht was once bleak,I no longer cry a tear My soul maybe set dormant but I ride without fail So join me as I venture thru this notorious killers tale |
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02-17-06, 02:54 PM | #2 | ||||
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02-17-06, 03:41 PM | #3 | ||||
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02-18-06, 11:33 AM | #4 | ||||||
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yeah this was nice.. style of stanzas is similar to some of my recent pieces i say..
flowed well... i liked the way you added some slang in.. some people complain when i do but i think it gives it mo hip hop flo had quite a lot of nice rhymes maybe a add a couple more mettas next time pz |
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02-18-06, 02:39 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 3450 F354
ty thnx bro, ....... gud feed, ive never red ur flows, but ima chek em soon ,,
yer i agree,,,, needs mor mets... i dint want this to b too poetic so i agree wit u ther ty agen |
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02-23-06, 07:46 PM | #6 | ||||
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Feed Bak Dont Sleep
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>>>>>>>>> Needin Feed,,, Dnt Sleep On This
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