NOTORIUS KILLAZ TALE


Blade lifted steadily from the cold corroding concrete
Dressed in black, demons coercing the mind to be discreet
As I make ma way to a new day, killing displays my intention
A sinister passion erupts from the depths of this prehension
Ma ruptured heart departs from this deprieved society
Midnight,I make ma way with one objective that’s breakin me
To take whts rightfully mines, an unjust soul no eye has seen
Invsible from social circles dispersin to places ive never been
A villanous monster ive become anguish empowers on my veins
Bleedin pain I still ponda for peace to get me through this day




My Mind inclines the revenge of a tyrant who bursts with wealth
Took away da lives of ma family jus to increase his boost of stealth
Now stands, this renegade no fear is left, but my blade now bleeds
I take no heed just killin sprees to make these bitches see
The pain inflicted , mind depicted when visions start to emerge
I chose the path of bitterness, for a rightful cause I now diverge
People think how violent I am when I murder an line the chalk
Of the victims ive killed,cats ive thrilled to show which way I walk
Some say im a killer but fate has lead me to this thought
Every action poses a reaction now I let my knife talk




Approached the area of my victim to be, im grippin to my blade
Now ready to avenge the deaths as power lurks in this renegade
Steadily as I cross like a ninja through barricades of disapproval
My conscience bares no sympathy , I now urge for his removal
Readily I prepare, through the murky air I come, but I do not warn
A duty I must I must perform, must-do norm, my anger not yet torn
Finally I arrive excited, my intentions higher than what I expected
My conscience is now clear of my prime objective, an I accept it
I reached up for my icy blade , an grabbed his lean neck
From behind, I left no time an slowly forced it till he was dead




Now fully complete but my heart still bleeds for the pious souls
Took avenge but still im lonely my heart is full of thrustin holes
The ambition ive longed to achieve, has finally reached my waters
Finished with the slaughter, now I should move on, an plus I orta
Overcome the misery that plagued my heart an plagued soul
Reached the last chapter , now the legend is fortold
No longer can these cats phase me , I made it clear
Reached my peak, of wht was once bleak,I no longer cry a tear
My soul maybe set dormant but I ride without fail
So join me as I venture thru this notorious killers tale

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yeah this was nice.. style of stanzas is similar to some of my recent pieces i say..

flowed well...
i liked the way you added some slang in.. some people complain when i do but i think it gives it mo hip hop flo

had quite a lot of nice rhymes

maybe a add a couple more mettas next time

pz

ty thnx bro, ....... gud feed, ive never red ur flows, but ima chek em soon ,,
yer i agree,,,, needs mor mets...
i dint want this to b too poetic so i agree wit u ther

ty agen

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