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Old 02-26-06, 01:55 AM   #1
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This piece employs the thought of how undiscovered cultures have a better lifestyle than those who have been revolutionized by technology. Read on..



I tie the noose everyday in these imperative ways
This computer may as well be tied to my leg, it's a ball and a chain
To call my life plain would be lame and insane
'Cause I'm a game lion, just locked away in a cage
I leave the office in a daze - singin' the blues
To flick on the tube and get lost in the news
Get confused n' shit when wifey tells me to get up
Calls me a lazy fuck - but I'm makin' the buck
So I'm stuck in the muck when I talk to my kids
'Cause they think that love equals me buyin' 'em shit
Ungrateful bitch, hitched with life's luxuries and such
But cutlery ain't lovin' me, I need to experience touch
My heart's crushed, but my brain keeps on pressin'
On the idea that I'm not meant to be free......
...........................Just chained to "life's" stresses
It's infectious - native tribes hide behind blindness
Unseen by the world and curled in God's kindness
Hunt, Build - be merry with my frizzly fathoms
Shit, If life was that easy I'd be fuckin' Grizzly Adams.



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Old 02-26-06, 10:36 PM   #2
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Old 02-27-06, 12:34 AM   #3
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hey bro i liked this it's true everything you said they always wan't more than what you can give them good structure nice flow heck it was pretty good 7/10 keep it up and elevate
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