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Tmoney0056 5 62.50%
Axe Affect 3 37.50%
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Old 03-06-06, 09:43 PM   #1
Axe Affect
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From: A-Town
Axe Affect vs Tmoney0056

IP: 0464 7473

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6 - 12
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Old 03-06-06, 10:09 PM   #2
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Tmoney0056 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-06 10:09 PM.
 
Old 03-06-06, 10:19 PM   #3
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Axe Affect has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-06 10:19 PM.
 
Old 03-06-06, 10:25 PM   #4
Axe Affect
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I will split ya back, rip ya track, and you beatin me is like Michael Jackson goin back to black, just picture that.
Believe these votin cats when I get this KO cuz ill be crackin ya ankles and have you walkin on your kneecaps.
This kid is just a joke, and ill smoke him just like a weed bag.
These connected punches gonna freeze him like a game of freeze-tag.
I-RACKED yo head and I-RAN after your family and I BAGd-your-DAD as if this verse was another terrorist plot man.
I punctured these words into your belly and covered your shamed-decapated head as if u was in the taliban.
Stick to your diary writtin instead of producin raps
I dont let ''pussies'' hang considerin im ''nuessin cats.''
 
Old 03-06-06, 10:54 PM   #5
Tmoney0056
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IP: 1840 F1B8

this dude aint shit he's like playin cat and mouse/
i'm the exterminator he's the rat in the house/
I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/
Your rhymes are like your dick too small and never hard/
But don’t worry T-money is sendin you a get well soon card/
my shits wide spread Axe your shits weak and local/
your chances of winning are bleak cuz T-money is loco/
man i'm not goin anywhere so let's see what u got/
lets see you rap with your vocal chords tied in a knot/
you can't go agaisnt me Axe your bones are to brittle/
you think u can hurt me weak rhymes, not even a little/
your goin against T-money i'm just way to advanced/
anyone who thought Axe could win he never had a chance/
 
Old 03-06-06, 10:55 PM   #6
Tmoney0056
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IP: 1840 F1B8

this dude aint shit he's like playin cat and mouse/
i'm the exterminator he's the rat in the house/
I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/
Your rhymes are like your dick too small and never hard/
But don’t worry T-money is sendin you a get well soon card/
my shits wide spread Axe your shits weak and local/
your chances of winning are bleak cuz T-money is loco/
man i'm not goin anywhere so let's see what u got/
lets see you rap with your vocal chords tied in a knot/
you can't go agaisnt me Axe your bones are to brittle/
you think u can hurt me weak with rhymes, not even a little/
your goin against T-money i'm just way to advanced/
anyone who thought Axe could win he never had a chance/
 
Old 03-06-06, 10:56 PM   #7
Tmoney0056
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IP: 1840 F1B8

this dude aint shit he's like playin cat and mouse/
i'm the exterminator he's the rat in the house/
I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/
Your rhymes are like your dick too small and never hard/
But don’t worry T-money is sendin you a get well soon card/
my shits wide spread Axe your shits weak and local/
your chances of winning are bleak cuz T-money is loco/
man i'm not goin anywhere so let's see what u got/
lets see you rap with your vocal chords tied in a knot/
you can't go agaisnt me Axe your bones are to brittle/
you think u can hurt me with weak rhymes, not even a little/
your goin against T-money i'm just way to advanced/
anyone who thought Axe could win he never had a chance/
 
Old 03-06-06, 11:01 PM   #8
Tmoney0056
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IP: 1840 F1B8

woops...had a typin error....the lasy post is the final product...lol my bad
 
Old 03-06-06, 11:51 PM   #9
MetEoR-K
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From: Michigan
IP: E32D D5DA

Voted For: Tmoney0056

TMONEY
I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/
Your rhymes are like your dick too small and never hard/
man i'm not goin anywhere so let's see what u got/
lets see you rap with your vocal chords tied in a knot/

~VS~

AXE AFFECT

-RACKED yo head and I-RAN after your family and I BAGd-your-DAD as if this verse was another terrorist plot man.


Pretty close battle, but not only was TMoneys structure by far better, he also had a punchline that took this battle by a little bit. Axe Affect had nice wordplay with one punch, which almost came out perfect. Not many metaphores, and similes were lacking. Multi's were about even on both sides. This WAS a very close battle, but I'm giving my vote to TMONEY
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Old 03-08-06, 11:13 AM   #10
Youngflow
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Voted For: Axe Affect

i vote for axe, he had good wordplay and Tmoney verse
sounded a little too simple so no hate just a vote one
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Old 03-08-06, 10:48 PM   #11
dazy
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This was feedback posted for Tmoney0056

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ok battle no really stand out so didnt vote and plus i couldnt vote so yeah ok though
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Old 03-11-06, 11:07 PM   #12
Axe Affect
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From: A-Town
IP: 0464 7473

upppin for some votes...............................
 
Old 03-12-06, 09:47 AM   #13
TaShay
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From: Chicago-U Already Know
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Voted For: Axe Affect

Nothing too outstanding from either parties.....worser than my battles ha...but newazy.. here is feed...

Tmoney:

this line could have been left out ur post

I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/

that shyt, didn't rhyme with shyt, so what was the necessary there?....


and God forbid, if you use YOU one more time or any form of you...i will electrionically bitch slap you...lol....

just elevate son, ull be on ur way..
Dude, u left me hangin...


Axe Affect:

u had a couple of good multi's in this verse....althought, the opener, had too damn many it aint even sound right, that thew me the hell off...

i dont get most of ur lines such as:
This kid is just a joke, and ill smoke him just like a weed bag.
(what does joke have to do with smokin like weed bag?)

These connected punches gonna freeze him like a game of freeze-tag
(made me laugh....so it was decent..)

I punctured these words into your belly and covered your shamed-decapated head as if u was in the taliban

(what the hell, fix ur damn grammar...)

Vote:Axe.
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Old 03-13-06, 09:16 PM   #14
Axe Affect
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iiight, uppin for some votes..........................
 
Old 03-15-06, 10:41 AM   #15
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Voted For: Tmoney0056

YALL NEED ALOT OF PRACTICE........JUS KEEPIN WORKIN AT IT YOU WEAK ASS DUDES
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