listenin...

...1st verse- flow needs work, lyrics are good tho...needs some more emotion, improve the delivery bruh, not really feelin this verse, no hate mayne...chorus- ehh, has potential but aint that hott...2nd-good flow....nice lyrics....some nice shti rite here, good emotion and delivery...im feelin this verse...yalls voices sound good togeva.....overall, the only thing im feelin in this song is the 2nd verse and teh beat...rey your shit could be nice but ya jsut need to fix your flow and use some emotion mayne...kep it up tho homie