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Old 03-30-06, 04:11 PM   #1
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first thing I realized is for the first verse you coulda stepped in earlier cuz I was gettin sick of the beat. um your quality is very weird, sound very monotoned (behind the beat) idk but you did but it sounds wierd. the lyrics were good and the flow was pretty solid man. delivery isn't to bad, could use work. your weakest point as of now is the quality, learn that shit man. 1
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