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Old 03-28-06, 08:25 PM   #1
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You know we had to do the remix, right? lol.

Anyway, we've been trying to do a collab for a while and UNF just asked me to redo the second verse of his song. Now it's super extra crazy dope and a half ™

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Old 03-29-06, 11:05 AM   #2
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And when we say super extra crazy dope we MEAN super extra crazy dope!

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Old 03-29-06, 11:47 AM   #3
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unf idk u over do it with ur energy u sound liek ur always yelling tone it down a little
lyrics wise u were cool flow was ok
enygma first shit ive heard from u in a while u sound good flow is your strong point voice is cool lyrics were pretty good
i dont really like the hook or the beat
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Old 03-29-06, 10:14 PM   #4
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listenin....

...i actually like the amount of emotion from unf on this trakk, thsi was some of the dopest ive heard from ya in a while...lyrically nice....nice delivery enygma, good lyrics...this was real nice yall....keep it up, unf particularly sounded nice on thsi beat...werd, crazy dope "and a half"
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Old 03-30-06, 10:25 AM   #5
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Old 03-30-06, 11:31 AM   #6
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nice intro beat is soundin good so far....

nah i dont know what willa is talkin emotion is straight on this.. i think this part is the hook... you should do somthin to make it stand out a lil more....good flow good lyrics i dont like the voice on the first verse its dif...quality on this is ok... but words arnt as clear as they could or should be...yeah... hook kicks back in ... i like this hook iz pretty dope...kinda catchy...damn nygma... shiz is hot... i like his flow.. good emotion...good delivery...good lyrics...nyg outshined unf a lil on this track....hook kicks back in its wearing on me i'm startin to like it more ....oh no third verse thats shitty....oh well.. shit was a pretty decent track...8/10 good work yo

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Old 03-30-06, 11:48 AM   #7
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aiight im lisin hook should be brought ought more first good flow n lyrics i like the emotion to good work....2nd verse im likin this one flow n lyrcs are on point but his its the voice that really makes it sound so good i like dis track 7/ maybe an 8 outs 10


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Old 03-30-06, 12:42 PM   #8
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thanks yall


J summers they aint a 3rd verse though lol
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Old 03-30-06, 12:44 PM   #9
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i know... i said OH NO! there isnt a third verse... that is shitty... word
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Old 03-30-06, 12:53 PM   #10
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Oh Lol,We Should Have Split It Like You N Shere Kahn Did That Was Dope
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Old 03-30-06, 04:47 PM   #11
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Old 03-30-06, 05:35 PM   #12
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betas coming in nice

hooks not bad..u need better noise reduc or sumthin tho...

flows on...u downed ur emotion a bit here...guess it's appropreate 4 the beat tho...

enygma=ur voice n flow is killer man....meds line is nice man

good track guys
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Old 03-31-06, 09:21 AM   #13
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Old 03-31-06, 04:48 PM   #14
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ok..typing as I listen...ok...opened decent but coulda opened with something more engaging....u didn't real draw me in with how u started...oh that was the hook? aww man u really need to up emotion an make it wetter...to give a real draw...its hurting ya...first verse...yea...ya delivery is borderline monotone...I can tell u still learning on how to really maximize ya voice...if u had fluctuated more woulda been lot stronger...k enyg...I def feel u on the slow flow way more son...it really brings ya voice out IMO...I like how u dragging out ya words....flow was tight jus needed a various...if u has mixed in a few bars of engyma spit spitting here & there more of a rhythmically up & down flow AH MAN that woulda tore this shit DOWN!!! but as is its still a good, enjoyable flow....keep dropping them joints son........1
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I can tell this was before UNF started mixing his stuff lol.

The beat is not my cup of tea. real synthed and mad basic, drones on a bit.

Hook was okay, damn UNF your mic whines like a bitch. damn man, I dunon if I'm just that tired or wtf but your vocalsa sound liek they're not in time with the beat. Like..they're on beat, but don't match up to the start and ends of the bars missing the snare points and so on the whole way through.

Second verse, pretty good qual, damn man, your vocals sound liek UNF's where it sounds like they aren't in time with the beat. The lyrics work, but there's some scrunched together sylables here and there. A droning beat liek this makes it sound like both you guys are on the verse of holding hands and jumping off a bridge somewhere, which, to say the least is depressing

Honestly man, personally, I think you guys should lay these vocals over another beat, because this one isn't doin it for me at all. The bassline is mega faint as it is so even hearing the 'beat' and following it is hard as it is.


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