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04-05-06, 11:18 PM
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This is sad, and touching. I feel like it would be wrong to try and give constructive feedback on a piece that came from the heart. You wrote it out of love for Lauren and a love for writing, and it was every bit as touching as i would have hoped.
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...483#post2710483
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04-12-06, 04:13 PM
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word, this piece had lots of emotion in it & im sorry for ur loss, it was kinda short but very touching.keep up the good work... RIP.
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