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Old 04-02-06, 04:57 PM   #1
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Old 04-02-06, 06:47 PM   #2
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Old 04-02-06, 07:12 PM   #3
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Old 04-06-06, 10:55 AM   #4
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your wack as a fact, i got you on target like lazer pens
you aint won jack...
...but when jack won, you bitched for days on end
you got a sick record, but the whole things a raffle
cause you take 'ALL...
but that jus shows the standard of opponents you battle*
your dickrides going, its showin that your a fucking prick
you ran the PLL, and since that you aint been runnin shit
you got no strenght,UK's winnin n youll be leaving finished
cause its known that austin powers are completely british
il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time
your gay mime, no new concepts your rhymes are growin old
so il kill you so bad, austin will again be stone cold
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly
your a definate hit? nope, your gay and im winnin
but you are "inside man"...but steer AWAY from the women

*battling someone called SKALL...who the fuck?

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Old 04-06-06, 08:59 PM   #5
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Lmao @ this shit. Battling nobodies? Who took you out of the Tag Team tournament again? Oh yeah. . that's right. .

Get the fuck out of here with your played ass nameplays.

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your wack as a fact, i got you on target like lazer pens
you aint won jack...
...but when jack won, you bitched for days on end


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Originally Posted by Mimesis
In reality my verse was better then Jack's shit.. now I'm droppin this
Cause your verse may be better then Jack shit..
..but that's not really an accomplishment


You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
Even YOU recognize my skill. . while you ain't tight with the fellas
I'll make your murder so graphic your whole fucking site'll be jealous
That shit is ugly as hell though. . you really can't be steppin to me
Cause I stop at NOTHING. . so you'll have around 3 seconds to speak

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il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr. Key
What an ugly sight, so i got no choice but to whore the kid
Cuz Write's Pixar so terrifying..he'll be starring in their first horror flick


You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts
That whole damn verse is flipped, listen to what I've told this queer
Your reputations on the line. . but that shit's been on hold for years
I'll end this with the pic in your avy. . know you ain't beating me
Cause you may have put your Duke's up. .
. .but we already know you'll get dropped with this Sweet 16
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Old 04-06-06, 10:06 PM   #6
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your wack as a fact, i got you on target like lazer pens
you aint won jack...
...but when jack won, you bitched for days on end
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly
your a definate hit? nope, your gay and im winnin
but you are "inside man"...but steer AWAY from the women

vs.

You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
That whole damn verse is flipped, listen to what I've told this queer
Your reputations on the line. . but that shit's been on hold for years
I'll end this with the pic in your avy. . know you ain't beating me
Cause you may have put your Duke's up. .
. .but we already know you'll get dropped with this Sweet 16

10 - 8, I got mimesis taking this with one more quotable

Daubs, I kinda felt like you half assed this verse a lot, your wording coulda been a lot better on a lot of lines, that woulda added a lot more to the punches. This wasn't one of your better verses, you also had some played stuff, like the stone cold line wich i've used before, and a few others. Mimesis, I liked your verse, but I felt you kinda fell off towards the end. Still, you got this

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Old 04-06-06, 10:38 PM   #7
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Daubs Verse...
your wack as a fact, i got you on target like lazer pens
you aint won jack...
...but when jack won, you bitched for days on end
you got a sick record, but the whole things a raffle
cause you take 'ALL...
but that jus shows the standard of opponents you battle*
your dickrides going, its showin that your a fucking prick
you ran the PLL, and since that you aint been runnin shit
you got no strenght,UK's winnin n youll be leaving finished
cause its known that austin powers are completely british
il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time
your gay mime, no new concepts your rhymes are growin old
so il kill you so bad, austin will again be stone cold
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly
your a definate hit? nope, your gay and im winnin
but you are "inside man"...but steer AWAY from the women
iight 6/10




Mimesises verse...
You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
Even YOU recognize my skill. . while you ain't tight with the fellas
I'll make your murder so graphic your whole fucking site'll be jealous
That shit is ugly as hell though. . you really can't be steppin to me
Cause I stop at NOTHING. . so you'll have around 3 seconds to speak

dis 1 2
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts
That whole damn verse is flipped, listen to what I've told this queer
Your reputations on the line. . but that shit's been on hold for years
I'll end this with the pic in your avy. . know you ain't beating me
Cause you may have put your Duke's up. .
. .but we already know you'll get dropped with this Sweet 16

ayo shit fiyaah man 9/10
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Old 04-06-06, 10:39 PM   #8
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and can u guyz drop a vote on my battle vs chris stylez thanx
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Old 04-06-06, 10:45 PM   #9
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You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
Even YOU recognize my skill. . while you ain't tight with the fellas
I'll make your murder so graphic your whole fucking site'll be jealous
That shit is ugly as hell though. . you really can't be steppin to me
Cause I stop at NOTHING. . so you'll have around 3 seconds to speak

vs

your gay mime, no new concepts your rhymes are growin old
so il kill you so bad, austin will again be stone cold
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly
your a definate hit? nope, your gay and im winnin
but you are "inside man"...but steer AWAY from the women


i voted for mem cus his stuff was flowing better and he had better structure and aslo had better punches.other guy u had some ok stuff just u were beat by mem to day....
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Old 04-06-06, 10:47 PM   #10
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ayo jc and whoeva is on can u dro pa vote on my battle vs chris stylez shits fiyahh
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Old 04-07-06, 09:37 AM   #11
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your wack as a fact, i got you on target like lazer pens
you aint won jack...
...but when jack won, you bitched for days on end
lmao, nice twist to it
you got a sick record, but the whole things a raffle
cause you take 'ALL...
but that jus shows the standard of opponents you battle*
ehhh, descent punch
your dickrides going, its showin that your a fucking prick
you ran the PLL, and since that you aint been runnin shit
nice personal
you got no strenght,UK's winnin n youll be leaving finished
cause its known that austin powers are completely british
ok punch
il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time
simple, yet flowed well
your gay mime, no new concepts your rhymes are growin old
so il kill you so bad, austin will again be stone cold
heard this before, i think last week
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
nice wordplay here, good punch
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly
ehh, didn't rhyme and had bad flow
your a definate hit? nope, your gay and im winnin
but you are "inside man"...but steer AWAY from the women
lol, good punch here



You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
lol, real nice punch mim
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
pretty good, not the best tho
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
lmao, i was actually at that site....
Even YOU recognize my skill. . while you ain't tight with the fellas
I'll make your murder so graphic your whole fucking site'll be jealous
lmao, good punch
That shit is ugly as hell though. . you really can't be steppin to me
Cause I stop at NOTHING. . so you'll have around 3 seconds to speak
pretty good, ncie flow as well
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts
pretty good punch.....
That whole damn verse is flipped, listen to what I've told this queer
Your reputations on the line. . but that shit's been on hold for years
lmao, prob the funniest bar in this verse
I'll end this with the pic in your avy. . know you ain't beating me
Cause you may have put your Duke's up. .
. .but we already know you'll get dropped with this Sweet 16
lmao, nope this was dope as well, nice wordplay


overall i think mimesis took this battle, just came better with some real nice concepts and a nice flow here. good battle ya'll
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Old 04-07-06, 11:16 AM   #12
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i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain
il leave you shamed, this bitch is a prick n a pussy
n' you aint magic like disney, but your pixar ugly

VS.

You can say they ain't the same. . shut it. I'm the best, you're the worst
Cause you may have NOT used the shit part. .
. .but you sure covered it in the rest of your verse
It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
That shit is ugly as hell though. . you really can't be steppin to me
Cause I stop at NOTHING. . so you'll have around 3 seconds to speak
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts


Wow, after what Daubs dropped against me in our FL battle I expected better. The verse he dropped here was just weak. Those two quotables were the only decent bars in his verse, everything else was just mediocre. Even though that Pixar bar was flipped, it was still decent and I never saw it used until I saw that shit in Mim's verse. That first bar of yours Daubs was weak, played shit and badly worded. And that line about kickin' Sharona in the dick or whatever was just fucking wack. Overall a lot of your bars were some shit talkin' and not done well. Mimesis didn't really come as hard as he can, but he had twice as many quotables. All those plays with calling you shit and nothing were funny, flipped well and the wording made them cool. A lot of the shit that Mimesis did was similar to what Daubs was trying, but Daubs failed to pull it off in this battle.

I'm going to be real serious and honest.. NO HATE.
Mimesis in this battle came sub-par for his level but still managed to take in my eyes an easy win because for some reason Daubs, this battle... your verse sucked ass. You can do SO MUCH better. We all have an off period though.

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Old 04-07-06, 11:44 AM   #13
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word.

props mim.

and you had a nice flow and structure, so you definately took this [JCREAL/]

but ya, you won.
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Old 04-07-06, 06:44 PM   #15
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