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Old 05-26-06, 12:57 PM   #1
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aight listening: Beat - not feeling it...

flows a lot more improved...articulation needs a bit more work as does delivery...lmao @ chip shop line...you've got better but i think you should work wit some better beats...actually holds ya verse back in a way...or at least search up better soundclick beats coz them beats sound like someone a raver would listen to lol...

but keep droppin you'll be giving E.C a run for his money soon

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Old 05-27-06, 01:18 PM   #2
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sounds like a fruity beat, lmao yeah sounds dance hall lol, beat is not bad,pretty good,flow is mmm i dunno man, but nice track, youre getting better,who made this beat
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Old 05-27-06, 04:29 PM   #3
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tha beat is drownin ur vocals..cudnt really get tha full effect on tha track since i cant really hear tha lyrics..try lowerin tha beat nd raising tha vol on ur lyrics..track is short too..flo is pretty much there..overall tha track is koo..keep doin u mayn
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Old 05-29-06, 06:14 AM   #4
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eww @ beat @ 1st...eww @ real beat...you come in w a lil to much energy..work into it a bit...a few "uhh's and yeah's" maybe...your bars r to long, made ur flow off a lot..delevery is not here cuz ur rushing...emotion is good though...

keep workin @ it...
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Old 05-29-06, 09:25 AM   #5
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Old 05-29-06, 10:16 AM   #6
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I hate this beat lmao.

Your flows improvd madly compared to what i remember....
Deliverys nice,presence has upped seem confident now,you have the biggest UK accent i've heard in a long time.

Lyrics are koo, lol @polo line..

Good Shit

Overall:6/10

Keep dropping.....

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