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Uppin This Track

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ight listenin

quality really bad but ive heard worse

flow-you sound like a down south rapper 2/5 at least you stayed on beat just a boring flow
presence-0/5 i just didnt feel you on the track
delivery-0/5 you didnt bring it(in my randy jackson from american idol voice) it didnt sound like you meant wat you were saying
lyrics-1/5 i mean your lacking in quality of your lyrics just gotta up vocab and add multis metaphors similies and shit like that

overall 1/5 this was a boring track nice beat though and no beef just tellin u what i think

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"Pray that she abort that
if she talkin about keepin it
one hit to the stomach she'll be leakin it"-Joe Budden

He dont have a south accent...gotta east coast sound to me...
It was boring though...beat's sweet tho...cute beat ya know it fits the track...i lyk ya adlibbin and shit its nice...but your sounds is 2 monotone...i feel the vibe you was trying for you just need to switch up the flow...or somethin so i wanna listen to the song..right now i'm just listenin to hear beat changes ya know. Chorus is okay. But your talking instead of spittin. Keep up.
hollaatchagerrl
-Truth-

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Word Yo East Coast Rapper.Uppin This

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