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Old 04-18-06, 10:00 AM   #1
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Mad Dog - Living Proof Rough Version

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top track...rough copy ima do the finished version soon as and Acuity jumping on this too so that'll be worth a listen but i'm brushing up my side as i been inactive as of late

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Old 04-18-06, 10:09 AM   #2
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vocab's pretty nyce, flow's tyte, could've done without the cursing closer to the beginning there lol...old school beat's tyte...not really talkin' about anything, just lyrics...that's tyte though

sounds like you freestyled the 2nd part cuz you had a gap in between there, raise up the vocals and the beat, it's all rather low...pretty good
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Old 04-18-06, 11:00 AM   #3
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good beat

flow was decent


nothing too wrong here


quality could be crisper



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Old 04-18-06, 03:53 PM   #4
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Everybody's and they grandma's used this beat... any who... you sound a lil slurred in the things you say... like there's something in a ya mouth while your spitting... the flow's pretty good though... Lil off beat in parts... Lyrically shit was ok... nothing really blazing though... but not wack either... keep doing what you do...

Anyway RTF... Check out that MC shit
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Old 04-18-06, 06:50 PM   #5
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hate the beat lol, too simple, quality is so-so, flow is pretty cool, you need more emotions, mmm aint really feeling this song to be honest, flow fells off sometimes, id give this a 6/10, just aint feeling the beat lol

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Old 04-19-06, 06:39 AM   #6
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cheers so far oooopin
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Old 04-19-06, 10:29 AM   #7
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niiiice,
tight beat, scratches sound right and well placed,
nice flow, had some aiight wordplay,
flow seems consistant thoughout,
ur subject manner was absent lol,
evrything was tight except that,
but im wierd too lol, i think the song was just one of those ones about how hardcore u are LOL
it just didnt stand out to much for me though,
but it was preety good,
nice shit 7/10
this is only my opinion though

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Old 04-21-06, 06:48 AM   #8
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lalalalala uppin
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Old 04-21-06, 03:57 PM   #9
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Listenin'...beat is decent...intro is kool..i dont like ure voice..and the quality aint rlly good, however i like ure flow u need compress ure shit or dynamic process it cos its goin up n down in volume n in turn i cant hear what ure sayin'., youre voice is not that bad actually but i think its only bad because of the quality...multis decent..jus not my type of track 6/10
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