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Old 04-24-06, 07:40 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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my man black....no one leavees you feed....how fucked up is that.....let me take a sec to listen to this ish....


well i had heard other versions of this...you really improved the quality from what it was...but you need a hiss redux badly...or something....the beat is chill, and your flow on it is nice but a bit boring...its the same the whole time almose....the lyrics...well thats where you excel your lyrics are nice....but quality still needs to get upped alot....the hook could be up in volume a bit....its like you got the peices to the puzzle but your puttin it together wrong.....(meaning if you could get your quality down and flexed your flow up and down a bit itd be very very ill) question.....were you a text head before you started audio? i unno.....so premise and lyrics but the rest still needs to be upped....hopefully other people will leave you feed and help you out some more
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