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Old 04-23-06, 08:56 AM   #1
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7. JTR (2-1) vs 8. Serbness (2-1)

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Old 04-23-06, 01:37 PM   #2
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fuck this shit.
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Old 04-23-06, 01:43 PM   #3
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12 lines, that's it.
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Old 04-23-06, 04:15 PM   #4
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em ur mother is a crack whore kims a known slut so whats halie goin to be when she grews up?

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Old 04-23-06, 05:39 PM   #5
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drop early? like today?
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Old 04-23-06, 08:48 PM   #6
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I can drop today I guess if I feel like it.
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Old 04-24-06, 11:25 PM   #7
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we're dropping tuesday, well I am, so you try also if you're reading this, I'm going 12 lines.
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Old 04-26-06, 01:57 AM   #8
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222280
WTF! this guy looks like a girl??? jack = shemale?

She a decent chick though, faggots wine and dine her
She used to play with dicks, now she puts past behind her
Like common, why strike the pose? you getting laid is when?
the camera added 15 lbs, and it looks like ya nose then took ten
[dead]Don't be act'in tuff.. you nuttin but a dipshit
give you a black eye, to match ur fukin lipstick

Sucks bein poor.....


This guy dont play baseball, but he a great THUG
But his home runs.. trailors are nothing to be ashamed of
nice streak kid, but agaist me ur bound to crash
you winnin this is like ur dildo.. How you had to pull from ur ASS

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This was from tonight,


As any retard would be able to see by now, both bodies in both pics are identical, noticable by the belly button. But that still dosn't prove anything, soooooo --------________--------


R.i.p jack, the cracker lived a tuff life with abuse
gang bangers got tired from the ass..
.. & and put his bellybutton into good use
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Old 04-27-06, 10:47 PM   #9
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I think

Apparance on your side ain't good, lets hope ur smart
Pictured this guy naked in class... AND FAILED ART!


^ that should be somewhere in the top punches.


I discriminate faggots, shame on 'em, wear a bag dude
And by the looks of it I aint the only one
...your art teacher must hate fags too!
Lets be real, kids predicted Serb to win, guess my fate is to die
So I'm scared to battle you
...but ONLY cuz I don't like being pictured naked by guys
I ate him alive, fake gangtsa, i'll pop the trigger and pull it
If Serbs reppin' Thug-Life, Tupac's happy he copped them bullets

Sucks being a faggot...

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I'm taking a break from fighting (kickboxing) for awile. need a break from it, so i think ima go get the blood sucked and fix my nose.

Nice excuse for the huge nose, a lie and you know it friend
Cuz JEWISH that you didn't have a nose like them
I been doing Judo punk, so try and prove that you hard
Man, i'll just wack-ness, and prove what you are!
We can go blow for blow, I’ll crack his dome & toss ‘ness
Because I also kickbox… and ruin your home in the process
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Old 04-27-06, 11:40 PM   #10
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Nice verse dawg.

lets get some votes on this.
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Old 04-28-06, 09:22 AM   #11
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Like common, why strike the pose? you getting laid is when?
the camera added 15 lbs, and it looks like ya nose then took ten
This guy dont play baseball, but he a great THUG
But his home runs.. trailors are nothing to be ashamed of

VS.

Nice excuse for the huge nose, a lie and you know it friend
Cuz JEWISH that you didn't have a nose like them
I been doing Judo punk, so try and prove that you hard
Man, i'll just wack-ness, and prove what you are!
We can go blow for blow, I’ll crack his dome & toss ‘ness
Because I also kickbox… and ruin your home in the process


This was an ok battle. I expected better to be honest based on the skill I know both battlers have. Serb had an average verse and really only those two bars stuck out to me. Others were worded wrong for my liking and you didn't take full advantage of the concepts you was using. Jack started real slow and the bars weren't hitting for me but he finished strongly with three solid bars that made me laugh. The closer was the best bar of the battle, it is a concept I've seen used by Mimesis before.... he used it like " we could slapbox, but I wouldn't wanna destroy your home " or something like that anyway. JTR flipped the concept nicely and it made me laugh anyway....nice shit. Overall it was JTR's finish that helped him take this battle.

V/ - JTR
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Old 04-28-06, 11:09 AM   #12
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Old 04-28-06, 11:16 AM   #13
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She a decent chick though, faggots wine and dine her
She used to play with dicks, now she puts past behind her
^lol funny cool punch witty
nice streak kid, but agaist me ur bound to crash
you winnin this is like ur dildo.. How you had to pull from ur ASS
lol cool punch

vs.

I discriminate faggots, shame on 'em, wear a bag dude
And by the looks of it I aint the only one
...your art teacher must hate fags too!
^nice punch
Nice excuse for the huge nose, a lie and you know it friend
Cuz JEWISH that you didn't have a nose like them
witty and not bad
We can go blow for blow, I’ll crack his dome & toss ‘ness
Because I also kickbox… and ruin your home in the process
so so decent punch

overall vote//JTR

more quotables and both should of hit alitle harder
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Old 04-29-06, 12:18 PM   #14
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She a decent chick though, faggots wine and dine her
She used to play with dicks, now she puts past behind her
This guy dont play baseball, but he a great THUG
But his home runs.. trailors are nothing to be ashamed of

vs.

Lets be real, kids predicted Serb to win, guess my fate is to die
So I'm scared to battle you
...but ONLY cuz I don't like being pictured naked by guys
Nice excuse for the huge nose, a lie and you know it friend
Cuz JEWISH that you didn't have a nose like them
We can go blow for blow, I’ll crack his dome & toss ‘ness
Because I also kickbox… and ruin your home in the process

I got JTR taking this shit. .
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Old 04-29-06, 01:18 PM   #15
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She a decent chick though, faggots wine and dine her
She used to play with dicks, now she puts past behind her

This guy dont play baseball, but he a great THUG
But his home runs.. trailors are nothing to be ashamed of

vs

I discriminate faggots, shame on 'em, wear a bag dude
And by the looks of it I aint the only one
...your art teacher must hate fags too!

Nice excuse for the huge nose, a lie and you know it friend
Cuz JEWISH that you didn't have a nose like them
I been doing Judo punk, so try and prove that you hard
Man, i'll just wack-ness, and prove what you are!
We can go blow for blow, I’ll crack his dome & toss ‘ness
Because I also kickbox… and ruin your home in the process

vote:jtr..nice battle
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