not bad man

had some cool lines in there

short and sweet, cool flow and aight rhyme scheme

keep up the good work son

"Line after line, use the emotions to guide me
But if I speak from my heart then the words stay inside me
So I open my mouth, after I’ve taken a minute or two
Just to jot down some lines and think things through
Learn to say what I think, without breaking the rapture
Because I’ll know when I go, that these moments were captured."

^word

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