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Old 05-12-06, 01:32 AM   #1
TeamOne
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just seems to be a show off track......... voice is alil weird....... but it aint that much of a turn off or anythin..... nice punches but u need to weave em into the verse alil better, add alil more flow and/or multies..... i didnt like the lil hook thing, on my headfones it really annoys my ears.... drop me like soap in a prison......... u got some nice concepts in some cases but ur wording is always the god damn same so it gets annoying...... theyre all "like" punches...... u just need to start wordin ur concepts better and get more diversity in wording and flow......... straight track
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