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Old 05-12-06, 01:37 AM   #6
David Lama
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cool shit man

some real shit in there, had some good worded lines and an aight flow. not bad at all. keep dropping homie

"Im a man in this war just trying my best to survive
Ive watch men everywhere die and lose there live
All I have is me myself and god right by my side
Wit my gun in my right hand while I try to hide
What am I gonna do just a few men left in my army
But there all spread out and very far from me

Bang Bang.....a gun shot was fired a couple feet away
And then I saw my buddy in the dirt where he would stay
I walked over to tryin lift him up on to his weak feet
But then he told me im the only 1 to decide if we’ll b beat
His breath then started fading and I stood there in tears
And then walk out to the field wit all kinds of fear"

^felt those most
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