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05-10-06, 06:24 AM
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Artikulate - On The Low Low
IP: F510 8B3A
www.soundclick.com/artikulate
New shit, jacked the scratches from some eJay shit, tell me what you think Peace Feedback Link 1 Feedback Link 2 |
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05-10-06, 07:42 PM
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New to RV
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IP: F510 8B3A
uppin dont sleep
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05-11-06, 06:28 PM
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I'm So Punny
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IP: 4E71 78C5
here we go....
great quality, i really like your flow, we should make a song...hahahahahahahah ain't no biggie....ahhahaahha, best line i've heard in a long time. beat the daylights outta you on top of the sun, wow monster shit right their...good job. i liked most of the lines, except the short bus line...life jacket line was good, scratches are a little loud...shits great, best song i've heard on here in a while man.
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05-11-06, 08:44 PM
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...Jea...
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IP: C2FB 933D
iite iite...
...you got a nice flow dawg...flows original, not my style but its still nice...voice goes good wit the beat.....overall good track mayne.....i liked it, keep it up |
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05-12-06, 12:32 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: FF5C 8D5B
just seems to be a show off track......... voice is alil weird....... but it aint that much of a turn off or anythin..... nice punches but u need to weave em into the verse alil better, add alil more flow and/or multies..... i didnt like the lil hook thing, on my headfones it really annoys my ears.... drop me like soap in a prison......... u got some nice concepts in some cases but ur wording is always the god damn same so it gets annoying...... theyre all "like" punches...... u just need to start wordin ur concepts better and get more diversity in wording and flow......... straight track
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05-13-06, 01:51 PM
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New to RV
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IP: F510 8B3A
thanks for the feed uppin
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05-13-06, 02:41 PM
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...Jea...
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IP: C2FB 933D
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05-13-06, 07:31 PM
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New to RV
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IP: B535 8CE6
Tha Shit Was Real Hip Hop, But It Sounded Rugged If Those Lyrics Were Properly Decorated They Would Be On Hit Son! U Guys Have A Real Def Jux Old School Perduction Sound To It Its Kinda Catchey Tho But Quality Is A Def. Must Dog!
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...921#post2741921 Smoke1 Return Tha Favor Please
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